Bantu 2

a butterfly alights upon my hand
an ethereal insight completes my verse

BANTU an imagist couplet Each line a compete idea,the 2nd however constrasts with a complementary description or explanation or metaphor thereof
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Brian, wonderful lines _Constance
Strand Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Cheers Constance,and thanks for your support to all my endeavours here.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:24 PM
LOVE IT.......SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:48 AM
stunning visual, brian... you splash paint with meaning and spontaneity!.. huggs
Strand Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Thks Nette, this couplet form is very illuminating and not as easy as it appear
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