Bantu

Murmuration of starlings Drone swarm light show 30 Mar 2023 Written Bantus Poetry Contest Sponsor: Suzanne Dalaney

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/19/2023 7:52:00 AM

An excellent Bantu, David! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/8/2023 4:26:00 AM

I love the way you had juxtaposed nature with the latest technology. Congratulations on your 1st place win, David.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/7/2023 8:05:00 AM

Lovely images. Congratulations on your win! :)

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/6/2023 11:24:00 PM

Ahh I remember enjoying this one now - apologies I didn't comment sooner :) I think it made me contemplate my own as this one was so pretty and mine quite strange :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2023 4:21:00 PM

so cool, David!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2023 1:26:00 PM

Ahh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/30/2023 10:27:00 PM

Good analogy, David :)

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/30/2023 6:47:00 PM

Awesome Bantu, David. :)