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Geese flying in V formation on the clothes line – my sweater flaps in the breeze March 25, 2023 For Suzanne Delaney's Write Bantus Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/8/2023 9:47:00 AM

I see it clearly Andrea. Congratulations on your win! :)

Date: 4/8/2023 4:50:00 AM

When I did the laundry during the week, it brought this poem to mind. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. :)

Date: 4/6/2023 5:58:00 PM

Ha, remember that? What imagery Andrea! The sun shinning the wind blowing through garments, wow. Congratulations!

Date: 4/6/2023 3:03:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your placement. Yours is a fun one:)

Date: 3/26/2023 10:49:00 PM

Very well written, Andrea:)

Date: 3/26/2023 10:47:00 PM

Maybe it could be clapping.? still no sweat..' The laundry done..a placement won All's better yet..'

Date: 3/26/2023 6:50:00 PM

Very nicely done! Hugs ~ Kim

Date: 3/26/2023 2:12:00 PM

Lovely to see such mastery of the form! Elizabeth

Date: 3/26/2023 6:57:00 AM

You have certainly got the gist of this poetry form, Andrea! Well done // paul

Date: 3/26/2023 12:26:00 AM

Ah, was waiting for your poem after you mentioned it on a blog, and it was definitely worth the wait. Love this, Andrea :))

Date: 3/26/2023 12:14:00 AM

Excellent:)