Bantu

Geese flying in V formation
on the clothes line – my sweater flaps in the breeze

March 25, 2023
For Suzanne Delaney's Write Bantus Poetry Contest

metaphorhaiku

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Linda Alice Fowler

April 8, 2023 at 9:47 AM

I see it clearly Andrea. Congratulations on your win! :)

Suzette Richards

April 8, 2023 at 4:50 AM

When I did the laundry during the week, it brought this poem to mind. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. :)

I Am Anaya

April 6, 2023 at 5:58 PM

Ha, remember that? What imagery Andrea! The sun shinning the wind blowing through garments, wow. Congratulations!

Daniel Turner

April 6, 2023 at 3:03 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your placement. Yours is a fun one:)

Joanna Daniel

March 26, 2023 at 10:49 PM

Very well written, Andrea:)

Joe Maverick

March 26, 2023 at 10:47 PM

Maybe it could be clapping.? still no sweat..' The laundry done..a placement won All's better yet..'

Kim Rodrigues

March 26, 2023 at 6:50 PM

Very nicely done! Hugs ~ Kim

Elizabeth Mccann

March 26, 2023 at 2:12 PM

Lovely to see such mastery of the form! Elizabeth

Paul Callus

March 26, 2023 at 6:57 AM

You have certainly got the gist of this poetry form, Andrea! Well done // paul

Suzette Richards

March 26, 2023 at 12:26 AM

Ah, was waiting for your poem after you mentioned it on a blog, and it was definitely worth the wait. Love this, Andrea :))

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