Banter

He	“Never say I can't?” 

     	She	“Why  not meet defeat
     		admit you're seldom right.
     		Saying you CAN is vanity
    		and looking for a fight.”

He	“Don't look back on failure ...?”

 	She	“Dwell on failure is what I say;
 		thank failure with a smile!
 		A learning tool is what it is
 		to shorten your next mile.”

He	“Good results are scant.”

     	She	“Oh goodness, where are you looking?
     		You breathe the air where roses bloom
    		and eat your wife's fine cooking.
     		Taste the gift of life; don't focus on doom.”

He	“But, praise is less than complaint!”

 	She	“Enjoy the ACTION she says, not the praise!'
 		You decide, what you value
 		and all the judgments you raise.
 		Your worth of self is what you should pursue.”

He	“Embrace the TRUTH with stoic composure.”

     	She	“The truth...which truth is that?
     		Laugh, I say, in the face of those
    		who would oppose you, tip your hat.
     		Revelations come to those who grow!”

He	“Be rawhide tough and BULLDOG mean.”

 	She	“Oh God, what men don't do?
 		Be sweet, be soft be kind I say
                           and like will return to you
 		for your soul you've not betrayed.”

He 	“Defeat has no place in our repertoire ”

She	“It's not defeat to wish upon a star.”

©  Jan 2012 	Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Allen Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 12:22 AM
Tis quite the debate in this little spar with words. I am surprised that you seem to give her the greater wisdom than he in this battle of wits or is it one upmanship?
Henderson Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 1:02 AM
This was a collaborate and I wrote he and a she wrote she. A GOOD friend of mine so I didn't mind.
Brown Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations Charles, I am so happy to see you here at the top of the winners list. Love, Carol
Squyres Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 6:35 PM
smiling...loved this conversation. Congratulations on your winning spot !!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 10:51 PM
Congrats on your victory! I could read this he said, she said over and over never growing tired of it. This is the banter of a successful union, I say. Opposites attract!
Song Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Charles,,,congrats to you on a fun he said she said write! A unique entry for this contest and truly creative. Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 4:13 PM
haha, He said, she said, Mars and Venus, and never the twain shall meet (did I say that right) GOOD win, my friend. Congratulations.
Stanley Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 3:22 PM
This is a wonderful write, well composed and flows nicely, congratulations on you big 1st place win, Greg
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 1:35 PM
congrats Charles on a wonderful first place win for this conveersation...luv..
Guzzi Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 10:58 AM
yeah..HUZZAH! whoopie!!! geeez!!! [doing the happy joy dance LOL] Congrad's to us! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Two sides of a coin....wow, you have said it well! Congratulations on this very astute conversation!
Culverhouse Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 9:50 AM
interesting exchange....hope is my grip of tomorrow....my husband is the die hard pessimist.....God help his half empty glass.
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