Bank Robber Blues

A bank robber named Billy O'Dell
Ran from the crime scene but he fell
Down a gigantic manhole
Dropped everything he stole
And now sits with a sore head in a cell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Ha!! Ha!! Just what I needed a good chuckle. Isn't always funny when criminals are their own worst enemy? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Thank you very much Sara, im pleased that you enjoyed it. The world needs more humour. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 4:29 AM
That’s what he gets!
Cunningham Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 6:40 AM
Thanks Kim, see crime doesn't pay all you get is a headache.
Macfarlane Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Haha, this make me chuckle. Delightful limerick Tom. Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thank you Cecilia, Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Ellison Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:42 PM
I've actually read about this O'Dell fellow! A hero of mine!!! Good evening Sir Thomas!!!
Ellison Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:41 AM
A man after my own heart... not the whiskey though! THE FILLIES!!!!!!
Cunningham Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:07 AM
Haha ,he was no Robin Hood though. Spent His money on young fillies' and whiskey.
Y. Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Lol! Tom, This is funny. I literally laughed out loud with this one. You're good at writing limericks. You should see the images in my head.Well done:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Alexis, Glad you enjoyed it, credit to Jan it was the limerick queen that got me onto them and now I can't stop lol. Tom
Sathasivam Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 10:28 PM
Excellent limerick. Enjoyed reading it.
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Thank you Ravi, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Tom.
Hoffman Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Serves him right,…now he knows that crime doesn't pay lol! Good one Tom!~Che :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Thanks Cheryl, yes its his own stupid fault for not planning his escape route. Tom
One Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 4:43 PM
You do these very well Tom, Jack better watch out!!!
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Thanks S.O., I'm learning from the master,Jacks a great inspiration. Tom
Tracy Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Ouch...cute limerick :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Thanks Melissa, he got his just desserts lol. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 2:39 PM
- As he deserved, Tom :) - Funny limerick :) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Thank you Sunshine, crime certainly didn't pay in Billy's case. Tom
Tripp Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Lol...Tom. This is a great limerick. Well penned!
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Thank you Rhoda, justice was well served. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Hello Tom, that is what the bank robber deserves for robbing a bank. Your poemis cute. have a nice day my friend.
Talbot Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 8:31 AM
I was thinking of replying in style. But I am laughing, might take a while. So sad the robber named Billy. Falling down a manhole, so silly. Did he smell? I bet he stunk vile!........ Mick
Cunningham Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 1:16 PM
They were doing work on a new sewer pipe so you can imagine lol. Love your reply. Tom
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