Banged Pendulums

Just when twilight and dawn finally mesh in the quiet passage of breaths released... there in that moment, I witness a thousand wishes dancing through the shadows of my mind, each and every one in the form of chiaroscuro marked by restless eclipses black to white. The yearning streaks of a journey creating long and endless days as season's rhythms cross the border etched on zodiac whirls : a pathway dictated by calibrated blows of a horn trilling spaces in moments caught in the web of hours, to seize glimpses held by ticks of banged pendulums. I find myself wrapped tightly in spaces that I can hardly breathe or pause-- when a traffic of former, present chapters slices the glide offered by life as chain-link of minutes quickly grinds collecting people and milestones along railways, while I desperately try to escape the rising and falling by moon-sun, endlessly bartering for more grace... dear swinging time, you rob my " now" through your eternal, impertinent ride. Pendulum Of Time and Space Contest Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann Re-Posted 5/24/2017
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De Burca Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Great poem congrats on your win.
Quigley Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 6:29 AM
Vividly described and lovely!
Merryman Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Nette, you have a wonderful and unique way with words. This write is so lovely and descriptive! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
Devnath  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Revisiting and wishing you congratulation my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Nette, Lovely win. WUV **SKAT**
A   Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Johnson Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 9:19 PM
Yes, time is a master thief. Congratulations Nette. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 8:21 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win in the "Surprise Me" Contest, Nette! Awesome last stanza! Love, Annalise
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 5:11 PM
hi Nette congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
A   Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 1:37 PM
Hi Nette, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
Richards Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 11:21 AM
"in the quiet passage of breaths released".......oh my......that one line and you had me in your poem with my heart!
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Very expressive winning work that you have penned..Congrats...Sara
Posey Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on a great win... Well deserved... Hugs..... Jake
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 6:28 PM
Your usage of words are played out in this wonderful Lyric. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Anglesey Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 6:06 PM
You certainly banged the pendulums of time in this one. Congratulations on your win: This poem is fabulous and going in my faves :)
Gabriella Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Oh this is really nice with such beautiful words! :)
Morgan Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:32 AM
what i witness is not a poem, written with time on a prism, wisdom not what in the making, its in wicked wheel of telling. my humble thanks for sharing a prized filled amazing poem.
Mckenzie Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 6:52 AM
um I like this your stir ones emotions with this piece! Laura :)
Jordan Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 7:57 PM
I've not read your writing until now. I was persuaded to do so by your wonderful blog bio, which I read while wishing Anne-Lise a fantastic birthday. I love this poem of yours, and I'll be sure to return soon to read more... Jack
Sivey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 3:45 PM
This write is simply a beautiful write my friend! I really loved reading this timeless poem, I especially loved the title of this piece and how it was used within the poem! What a glorious write, Great Work!!
Devnath  Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 1:03 PM
Wow! an excellent piece. Once I felt near to it, but failed to adorn with beautiful words as you have done quite perfect. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
Delaney Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 1:03 PM
You do amazing things with words. Always a pleasant ride.grateful for your presence. SuZ
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 10:30 AM
Interesting work..Time seems to go faster as we age..When we reach the penacle of the mountain and start downhill it swiftly goes by..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence there gives me encouragement..Sara
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 10:19 AM
... the time owns you ... you do not own the time my friend .... a poem which I much appreciated, it is beautiful and thoughtfully!! / / ........ You are good at baking ... cake looks amazingly good ..... Yes, it's my birthday .... thanks for congratulation. - I will come back to your blog throughout the day .... Thanks again sweet friend, Nette!! - Love / / always Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 9:35 AM
There are many lines in here that I can deeply relate to. My heart knows the joy & pain of tehse lines. Phenomenal job!
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