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Band of Rain

thunderous drum roll
lightning cymbals vibrating
black band of clouds sing

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2011 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine work.I like the second line especially..Sara

The Situation

Date: 1/18/2011 7:23:00 PM

congradulations on your win. T. H.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:15:00 PM

This is wonderful imagery. Congratulations, Stephen. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Stephen

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 11:57:00 AM

Clever use of music Stephen, I like it. Congrats on your fine win in Skat's contest....:)

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/17/2011 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:40:00 AM

Congrats Stephen on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this fabulous entry .. enjoy another top tenner for your great poetry with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Stephen, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 3:53:00 AM

Great victory my friend... congrats...

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/17/2011 3:40:00 AM

Stephen a stunning last line, congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest :) WN

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2011 2:28:00 AM

Congrats Stephen on your big win!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 9:36:00 PM

Vivid description. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:24:00 PM

Stephen! many Congratulations, another awesome entry !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 8:44:00 AM

a bombardment of sizzling expression, stephen... what a delight! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2011 9:31:00 PM

Excellent one Stephen and could really feel the thunder and see the lightening in your Haiku luv.. those black band of clouds will be on the winners list luv.. good luck...