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Band of Rain

thunderous drum roll
lightning cymbals vibrating
black band of clouds sing

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Sara Kendrick

January 21, 2011 at 4:45 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine work.I like the second line especially..Sara

The Situation

January 18, 2011 at 7:23 PM

congradulations on your win. T. H.

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:15 PM

This is wonderful imagery. Congratulations, Stephen. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 17, 2011 at 2:15 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Stephen

James Fraser

January 17, 2011 at 11:57 AM

Clever use of music Stephen, I like it. Congrats on your fine win in Skat's contest....:)

Caryl Muzzey

January 17, 2011 at 11:18 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2011 at 11:03 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 5:40 AM

Congrats Stephen on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this fabulous entry .. enjoy another top tenner for your great poetry with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:33 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Stephen, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

January 17, 2011 at 3:53 AM

Great victory my friend... congrats...

Wilma Neels

January 17, 2011 at 3:40 AM

Stephen a stunning last line, congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest :) WN

Kash Poet

January 17, 2011 at 2:28 AM

Congrats Stephen on your big win!

Joyce Johnson

January 16, 2011 at 9:36 PM

Vivid description. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 9:24 PM

Stephen! many Congratulations, another awesome entry !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Nette Onclaud

January 16, 2011 at 8:44 AM

a bombardment of sizzling expression, stephen... what a delight! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 15, 2011 at 9:31 PM

Excellent one Stephen and could really feel the thunder and see the lightening in your Haiku luv.. those black band of clouds will be on the winners list luv.. good luck...