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For Francine Robert's Welcome to Spring poetry contest.

A sonnet of such... Ten syllables per line.

 

As the sun appears from its winter hush, earthy meadows now appear green and lush. As its refreshing rays begin to peep animals awaken from their deep sleep. A band of bunnies hop to spring's delight, dancing among flowers yellow and white. With small fluffy tails and ears soft and long, seems like they're dancing to a secret song. Naughty rabbits nibble on tender shoots and chase each other in joyful pursuits. Skipping around lawns that need to be mowed It's the happiest they've been since it snowed. Their antics may not always seem funny, but it must be great being a bunny.

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Date: 4/6/2024 3:28:00 PM
Congrats on honourable mention in my contest , I am not one for placing everyone, people have to work hard to get placed in my contests so well done
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Date: 3/8/2024 10:37:00 AM
I loved reading your poem this afternoon... This is so sweet and so fun! ... You've done a wonderful job with the sonnet form!
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Date: 3/7/2024 1:37:00 PM
Really cute SO. We're seeing bunnies here in the US now. I see them on my lawn at night. They and all the other signs of spring are very welcome.
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Date: 3/7/2024 8:56:00 AM
Love love this poem , please forgive me for my delayed response, it is such a cute poemx almost cuddly. Congratulations on being awarded POTD. I would like to write a book for my granddaughter with poems I have written for children which I would like to scatter with a few others, this one is chosen if you would allow me . Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:17:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your POTD Silent One! :)
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:49:00 AM
This is so very sweet Mr S…..big Congrats on POTD! Debx
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Date: 3/6/2024 6:23:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, dear Friend. Enjoy your honor today.
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Date: 3/6/2024 5:02:00 AM
oh yes! Not surprised to see this as POTD, Silent! congratulations!
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Date: 3/5/2024 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD honors, Silent One. Your poem is perfectly delightful! It is in my faves. :)
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Date: 3/5/2024 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations and a spring bouquet of wishes, crafed especially for you Great news.,POTD winner ? Pangie
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Date: 3/5/2024 9:44:00 PM
Wow. Would you believe! I wote a similar this mourning. Even used similar words. Must have read my thoughts. This is so beautiful and a fav. Congrats. Pete
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Date: 3/5/2024 6:05:00 PM
Your thoughts bring a smile, Silent One. :) Spring is in the air, with flowers blooming everywhere. I think it would ' be great to be a bunny. ' For so many reasons. :) The picture you've chosen to go with your words is adorable. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/5/2024 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Silent One. Enjoy your day of recognition. I've been sick since Sat., I'll catch up when I'm well. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2024 6:06:00 PM
I hope you feel better soon, Bill. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/5/2024 5:57:00 PM
Hope better soon Bill. Friendly gatecrash:)
Date: 3/5/2024 4:46:00 PM
Awww a cute bunny story to end my day. How delightful. Enjoy the spotlight
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2024 5:44:00 PM
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Date: 3/5/2024 4:40:00 PM
Wonderful carefree poem Silent One! Definitely deserving of POTD. I love "winter hush" Cheers!
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Date: 3/5/2024 2:09:00 PM
Nicely penned Silent, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 3/5/2024 12:39:00 PM
Looks like this got a POTD as well. Big Congrats
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Date: 3/5/2024 12:38:00 PM
Yes, it's great being one, at least what the Playboy bunnies say. haha. This is excellent rhyme on a cute topic, SO
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Date: 3/5/2024 11:36:00 AM
Very cute poem, enjoyed reading it! -Smita
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Date: 3/5/2024 11:31:00 AM
Love this nice nursery rhyme poem. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 3/5/2024 10:54:00 AM
Great Nursery Rhyme, a fav. Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 3/5/2024 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, SO! What a delightful and sweet poem. Love the alliteration - "band of bunnies!" I think kids would love this poem. Recently, in the news, was a story about a bunny - a Flemish Giant. He was on his way to the slaughter house when rescued by a man who named him Big Bunny. Big Bunny is now an ambassador in San Francisco riding around in his own carriage, making friends everywhere he goes! He especially loves kids! Enjoy your POTD honor! Blessings to you!
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Date: 3/5/2024 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving POTD, dear silent one! well deserved. Keep inspiring!
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Date: 3/5/2024 6:51:00 AM
It would be great being a bunny, no worries at all except for feeding the tummy. A lovely write Silent One, congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 3/5/2024 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a cute/fun write/story. It must to be fun to be a bunny. Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win................
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