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Banana Split Heaven

Banana Split Heaven I'm in Banana Split Heaven, the ice cream parlor of my dreams, Choosing extra toppings and three flavors of sweet ice cream. A foundation of ripe bananas, served the purpose of a bed, For my decadent dessert, topped with cherries of bright red. I licked my lips in anticipation. Couldn't wait to greedily savor Huge scoops of creamy goodness in all my favorite flavors. Chocolate Moose Tracks, blended with cups of peanut butter, In the center, Bordeaux Cherry. Mmmm, I drool and sputter. Vanilla Raspberry Ripple is really quite sublime. Now it's almost ready, and soon it will be all mine. Lots of peanut sprinkles; sauces of hot fudge and caramel. Fresh whipped cream is sinful. Shhh, I will never tell. Spoon after spoon, I pigged out and ate the whole dish. Should I make one for you? Heck Yes! It sounds delish! October 22, 2015

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Laura Hay

Date: 11/12/2015 3:21:00 PM

It does indeed sound delish! Please do make one for me, tee hee, love it, well done! warm regards, Laura.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/12/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thanks, Laura. When ever you're ready, we'll do it.

James Inman

Date: 11/1/2015 10:37:00 PM

Lin, just finished a bowl of ice cream, sadly no bananas. Great write.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 10:52:00 PM

Awww just throw a little more ice cream and hot fudge in the bowl, and next time you're at the grocery...get bananas! Thanks, James.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/1/2015 10:24:00 PM

How yummy it sounds...Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 10:51:00 PM

It was yummy, Upma. It sounded so good that I had to have it...twice. Thanks!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/1/2015 8:02:00 PM

Lin, the firs line: ice cream parlor of my dreams puts me to sweet goodness, I so like the descriptive lines. I could picture doing it infront of me and just the last line, so generous of you!!! =`) hehehe BIG CONGRATULATIONS!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 8:07:00 PM

We can make that happen... come and visit me. Thank you so much for such sweet compliments, Olive.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/1/2015 5:27:00 PM

I was just sitting here making a mental list of the ingredients I have for making a banana split. LOL Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Janice

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 5:29:00 PM

Don't just sit there thinking about it, Janice...go get it. Thank you, so much.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/1/2015 5:21:00 PM

Lin Congratulations on your super delicious bannananananana Split Win!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 5:28:00 PM

Thanks very much, Michael.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2015 5:00:00 PM

I just love banana splits and I love your poem. Congrats!!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 5:27:00 PM

I'm delighted...Thanks.

Skat A

Date: 11/1/2015 2:55:00 PM

Lin, congratulations. SKAT

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 2:59:00 PM

Thank you very much, SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2015 1:25:00 PM

Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara __Banana Split is one of my favorites..I just only have them every once in awhile though maybe once a year..LOL

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 2:58:00 PM

Many thanks to you, Sara. Once a year? Oh no no no...get ye to a creamery!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/1/2015 12:32:00 PM

Oh! Please! Make one for me! Wonderful write, Lin, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 12:35:00 PM

Comin' right up, Eve! Thank you.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/1/2015 10:33:00 AM

Such an amazing dessert described in mouth-watering imagery! Congrats on your fine win, Lin! Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 12:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra. Those really are my fav. flavors.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/1/2015 10:06:00 AM

Not alone Lin! Congrats on your win!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Balveen. I guess it was worth the ice cream I ate because of it. lol

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 10/24/2015 9:16:00 AM

yummyyy ;)

Lin Lane
Date: 10/24/2015 2:39:00 PM

thanks, Remnant. I had to get some, and it's pretty much eaten. lol

Neva Romaine

Date: 10/23/2015 11:28:00 AM

Hey Lin, still visiting and enjoying your wonderful poems. Please don't leave me out of this delicious treat fest! Wow! I do believe my hips just grew another inch just reading this sweet poem of yours! Be Blessed, Neva

Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2015 12:08:00 PM

LOL Neva. Please do join us. We're making this an international sugar fest! Visit all you like...I love company. ~ Lin ~

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/22/2015 12:08:00 PM

Hi Lin: You chose all the right words to create a savory poem. My compliments!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/22/2015 12:17:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph. Would you like to join Jan on her flight to New Orleans and try this scrumptious concoction? lol...seriously, I'm happy that you like it and grateful for your compliment. ~ Lin ~

Jan Allison

Date: 10/22/2015 10:43:00 AM

I'm flying over right now - make mine a double lol - absolutely delicious write Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 11:04:00 AM

I love banana splits but don't often have desserts when we are out - have had too many disasters if you read my poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/22/2015 10:46:00 AM

Come on down, Jan! Your sweet tooth must be equal to mine. Thanks for appreciating this one. ~ Lin ~