Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Banana Cream Pie

Banana Cream Pie I could eat by the barrel
My waistline would suffer, it's a losing battle
I could eat like a fly
Forego all that pie
And still I'd resemble some hefty beef cattle

© Jack Ellison 2015

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Kp Nunez March 23, 2015 at 11:36 AM Cute...never mind the waistline, your humor would be fine...:D Kim Jack Ellison March 23, 2015 at 11:44 AM YES! Just one big fat happy camper!!! YEEHAW! LOve from Canada!! xxx

Lindsay Laurie March 21, 2015 at 10:32 PM G'day Jack... if its a losing battle Jack, then eat the bloody lot. You might as well be happy worrying about your waistline. Catch you - Lindsay Jack Ellison March 22, 2015 at 7:20 AM Great words to live by!!! LOL

Casarah Nance March 21, 2015 at 11:15 AM Well it would be a delicious way to go! Jack Ellison March 21, 2015 at 11:25 AM YES Jolly, old, and plump! xxx

Carol Eastman March 21, 2015 at 10:46 AM The word 'PIE' is dangerous around here... for a stampede ensues... of Trolls and Dragon my dear... They can't get enough... as their faces they stuff... I'm taking MY Banana Cream pie... and sneaking out of here!... Jack Ellison March 21, 2015 at 11:24 AM My all time favourite though is "Butterscotch Cream Pie"!!! Just saying it makes my mouth water! xxx