Bamboo Windchimes

bamboo windchimes dance carousing gently in the breeze ~ damselfly finds mate posted on June 14, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 11:18:00 AM

oh wow. this one is awesome

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2018 1:34:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/15/2018 10:08:00 PM

Captivating and vivid imagery Line. A great haiku! warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2018 12:02:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/15/2018 9:50:00 AM

Beautiful haiku with the "aha" moment at the end! Love it! Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/15/2018 7:10:00 PM

Aha indeed. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Pandita.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/15/2018 6:07:00 AM

Perfect Line! Great Haiku :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/15/2018 7:39:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi. Most appreciated.