Bamboo Tissue

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I asked my grandson for a two syllable word to get out of my own head. He came up with tissue, the starting point of this Tyburn. In Georgia we have lots of pollen thus sneezing.

bamboo
tissue
breakthrough
achoo
Hold onto your bamboo tissue box,
for quickly comes breakthrough achoo shocks.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/27/2024 9:18:00 PM

Way to go. Perfect. I find 'tyburns' so hard to do. You made this one seem effortless. (I imagine that it was anything but). Huzzah, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 5:32:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! I appreciate you!

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/27/2024 5:14:00 AM

Yep! Pollen will have its way: not nose nor tissue will stop the pollen issue. Lovely Spring, a two-faced kiss-you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2024 7:48:00 AM

LOL!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/27/2024 4:50:00 AM

Your grandson has a poetic mind just like his grandma. Yet another lovely poem adorned in wordplay. Splendidly delivered, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2024 7:48:00 AM

I try to pass it on a little bit to all six. One granddaughter is writing her own songs and asked me about poetry. She is 18 and headed to college, majoring in theater. I am excited for her.

Paige Hind

Date: 4/26/2024 5:15:00 PM

Wow...a bit genius- :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2024 7:46:00 AM

You are so kind, Paige! Thank you ~ Kim

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