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Balmy Peacefulness

Written: October 04, 2023 ________________________________________________________ In the tranquil aura of a tropical clime An idyllic scene, serene, pacific, sublime, As paradisal souls basked in gold auspicious. In peace, placid, prosperous, and prodigious. There stands a sedate, an ethereal being. It's a serene, glad coping; the knot is untying. Gone are the times of delightful harmony. She strolled rather softly, wanting to be. In the tranquility of unruffled days. She is peaceful and reserved in her ways. She soothed the serenity of quiet. Peace is serene in her finest climate. Quietly, she led over life's hush path, Lulled by the calm and restful aftermath, Sedate and quiescent, she remained. Silent and unshaken, quiet is sustained. As a dove, she let peace bear hold. Bringing a letup to the unrest untold. In her pacific nature, she found solace. Silence her weapon, her soother promise.
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Empress Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 7:00 AM
Brilliant storytelling using rhymes and imagery that flows so well. I can almost see and heat the whispers and soothing serenades in silence of an ethereal being! So celestial and poetic! Lulling and calming how your lines are articulated effortlessly. I especially love the ending “ In her pacific nature, she found solace. Silence her weapon, her soother promise.“ powerful ending! Soother ive never seen paired with promises! Very clever! A surreal and moving write this is. Love it
George Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 11:39 PM
"Sedate and quiescent, she remained. Silent and unshaken, quiet is sustained." She is so sprite like enjoying peace and tranquility away from the mad hurry of life. You have sculpted an image of mystic beauty and sedate grandeur!
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