Balm

cotton candy clouds dot the evening sky pink and lavender peaceful and relaxing the sunset soothes my soul

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Deepsy Lalin

Date: 5/22/2016 12:01:00 PM

wow! the beauty and glory of God shows in the beauty of your poem..

Romain Savignac

Date: 5/25/2014 9:43:00 PM

i think it's a simple and effective poem. good job

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/8/2014 3:27:00 PM

Hello, Chum. I was thinking about you today, wondering how you are. It's been quite a while since I saw you anywhere in the halls of soup. Hope you are well and that the family is all right. Is it spring on the Isle yet? We are finally getting a real taste of it here, in Ontario. Let us know how you are, if and when you can... PS such a sweet tanka... if I go by your tanka then you are somewhere relaxed and happy... cheers... you are missed!!!

Francine Roberts
Date: 5/8/2014 8:25:00 PM

awe, miss you too, was in a bad car accident two and half weeks ago, not concentrating well so haven't been writing and only seem to get on here long enough to catch up on my contest entries once a day,, recuperating , but it will take a few more weeks apparently then maybe I can be on computer more

John Pen

Date: 5/7/2014 10:58:00 AM

Another good thing in life that we all get for free. Sit back and watch the beauty of sunset. There is no fee for that I be

Michael Dom

Date: 4/18/2014 7:22:00 PM

I enjoy watching those clouds too.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2014 9:26:00 AM

Dear Francine, Those cotton candy clouds are always welcomed by the locals here. It's nice to know that no matter where we go, we can find solace in sunsets. Beautifully written, my friend. Love and best wishes for a Happy Easter, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/14/2014 10:57:00 AM

at that certian time of day when the sun sets and colours the clouds. I've seen this sky many times. and i can tell your watching while your writing.

Joseph Sergi

Date: 4/13/2014 5:31:00 PM

Francine a wonderful soothing poem it paints a beautiful picture.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/10/2014 2:35:00 PM

love this beautiful tanka. Thanks so much for your support, my friend - I hope you enjoy the book when you read it x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/3/2014 10:33:00 AM

Way to go with this very descriptive and expressive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Sara