Balm

cotton candy clouds

dot the evening sky

pink and lavender

peaceful and relaxing

the sunset soothes my soul

colorevetanka

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Deepsy Lalin

May 22, 2016 at 12:01 PM

wow! the beauty and glory of God shows in the beauty of your poem..

Romain Savignac

May 25, 2014 at 9:43 PM

i think it's a simple and effective poem. good job

Cyndi Macmillan

May 8, 2014 at 3:27 PM

Hello, Chum. I was thinking about you today, wondering how you are. It's been quite a while since I saw you anywhere in the halls of soup. Hope you are well and that the family is all right. Is it spring on the Isle yet? We are finally getting a real taste of it here, in Ontario. Let us know how you are, if and when you can... PS such a sweet tanka... if I go by your tanka then you are somewhere relaxed and happy... cheers... you are missed!!!

Francine Roberts

May 8, 2014 at 8:25 PM

awe, miss you too, was in a bad car accident two and half weeks ago, not concentrating well so haven't been writing and only seem to get on here long enough to catch up on my contest entries once a day,, recuperating , but it will take a few more weeks apparently then maybe I can be on computer more

John Pen

May 7, 2014 at 10:58 AM

Another good thing in life that we all get for free. Sit back and watch the beauty of sunset. There is no fee for that I be

Michael Dom

April 18, 2014 at 7:22 PM

I enjoy watching those clouds too.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2014 at 9:26 AM

Dear Francine, Those cotton candy clouds are always welcomed by the locals here. It's nice to know that no matter where we go, we can find solace in sunsets. Beautifully written, my friend. Love and best wishes for a Happy Easter, Carolyn