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BALLOONS


27 balloons let adrift aloft from the school
Rising in a loose group
Heading skyward, 
Smaller, further, till the sun’s setting 
Rays caught them only as specks
Visible now as a group, distance reducing 
Size and relative spacing
Until they seemingly stopped moving, 
Became fixed, like the stars.
All stars began like that: 
Today’s constellations are balloons
Adrift from ages ago:
Nothing dies; all becomes stars.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/3/2016 8:02:00 PM
what a beautiful idea! i'd love to become a star myself, sidney! a very touching poem...
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Sidney Beck
Date: 10/4/2016 12:10:00 PM
well thanks Ilene......I mean I , like everyone , have heard the 1970 s pseudo-philosophy of "we are stardust".........................but this balloon event really struck me as a way of understanding many things. I'm glad you liked it........best wishes...Syd

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