Balloons

Balloons, bolix!
A ghostly flight…
A fight for airspace…
So much air…blowhard.
To sail the seas of America’s skies…
Look down upon the stretch of land.
It landed,
on the eyes of the Montanans.

Balloons, buffoons!
A clownish cloud
passing off a Casper-guise.
A surprise visit from Uncle Xi.
Tea cups fragile…weather balloon,
my $@#.

Balloons, BS!
Talk talk talk
of the atmosphere,
holding the rotund idol up there.
He won’t fall from his pedestal
on his own. 

Balloons, asail!
Assailing, assaulting,
insulting. Assyria &
Babylon held ear
to the breakdown
of God’s people
elsewhere.

Balloons, bah-humbug!
Best pay heed.
Don’t get bested.
Poke holes in the intentionality.

2/7/2023
Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your win. Colorful birthday balloons are the best kind to have. Have a blessed day......................
Baker Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Alot of information woven into this balloon poem. Good Luck in the contest! Bill
Dutta Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Balloons are explored . Great. All the best. Love.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 11:16 PM
Balloons can be fun, though they were used for war. Great imagery. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 4:39 AM
We love our party balloons and taking a ride from Oz (Wizard of Oz reference) but let our enemies not prevail. God bless you and thank you, dear one!
Poet Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Enjoyed reading this beautiful and hilarious poem, Kim! Your great imagery shed more beauty on this poem. Good luck with the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much!
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