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Ballooning Through the Purple Dark

the moon drifts through the stars,
                      ropes soft against its glow,
                 a small basket swaying
             over the dark purple mountains~
         quiet as a lantern carried by the night.

                            a faint wind turns the ropes,  
                      slow enough to see the motion,  
                  steady enough to trust.  

                            the basket dips once,  
                        a gentle nod toward the ridgeline,  
                  then rises again  
             into the cool, bright hush.

                            the mountains hold their shape,  
                       dark shoulders folded beneath the sky,  
                  watching the moon float past  
             as though it were a traveler  
          with no destination
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August 29, 2026 at 8:14 PM
Superb imagism and comparison, sara. I feel as if I'm in 'Around the World in 80 Nights.' :) Gershon
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