BALLET OF WORDS

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BALLET OF WORDS Thoughts pirouette light, twirl on the blank screen of night, a ballet of words. Ink swirls with a dancer's grace, a grand jeté through the stars. Ink flows like soft rain, her verses spin on the breeze, gentle, yet profound. Spirit spills onto the page, a pas de deux with her soul. This poem was written for and published at Writer' Monk's weekly Poesy & Poise Contest, ©July 19, 2025 Sara Etgen-Baker, United States

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2025 5:10:00 AM

Lovely and graceful, Sara ~

Sara Baker
Date: 7/21/2025 5:12:00 PM

I appreciate you, your visit, and your comments. Glad you liked it...Sara

Maria Williams

Date: 7/20/2025 12:50:00 AM

Dear Sara,this is absolutely stunning — each line dances with such elegance and emotion. I love how you’ve woven movement and feeling into your words, creating a delicate choreography between ink and soul. The imagery is both graceful and powerful… a true pas de deux with the heart....Hugs

Sara Baker
Date: 7/20/2025 5:01:00 PM

I am touched by your comments for they are both kind and poetic. Thanks for your insights and for presence here on PS. You're a true gem! hugs & enjoy your week