Bald Eagle

Bare limbs attract
The contrasting plumage
Sharp eyes seek prey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sullivan Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Vividly beautiful!
K. Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Wonderful and vivid haiku you have here, Doris-- congrats! -- nikko :)
Campi Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 1:25 PM
The bald eagle is a beautiful bird. You did it justice here.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 8:16 PM
Congrats Doris on your HM in the contest with this magnificent write .. my friend.. enjoy tonight with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 8:04 PM
An interesting haiku, Doris. Quite unique. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 6:59 PM
I love the unusual twist to this take on the contest! And yes...their eyesight is the key to their success and survival....well done, Doris!! Congrats on your well deserved win!
Gorelick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 5:04 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest. Wel done. BG
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on your win..Mom
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Doris. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Many congratulations Doris on your win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Thoes piercing eyes of an eagle is beyond compare Doris. The color being sort of yellow with the dark pupil being in the center. Congratulations on your success with your haiku in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
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October 14, 2010 at 9:47 AM
Very nice haiku, Doris. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Good luck with this descriptive Haiku..Reads like a winner..Mom
Horsman Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 6:53 PM
this is really good, love it. Harry
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October 10, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Excellent Haiku!!!! a winner again my sweet...Luv Michael
Knop Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Very nice Haiku, Doris! Enjoyed the read!..Gert
Moribund Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Dear Doris: Love your poem!!! Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poem. Peace: Sheol
Roberts Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 6:42 PM
beautiful , good luck in the contest
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