Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Soup Social
Member Poems
Member Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Poetry Resources
Home » Poems » James Fraser » Balcony I Glimpse

Balcony I Glimpse

On opening eyes Looking, balcony I glimpse Inverted by sight Viewing naked silhouette Emerge do I, excited .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2014 7:19:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
eyes on sunrise glance//bathe in face of sunset hue//a twist on the left//some hair and curves glide then sway// I frozen afire... :) this my version to yours Mr. James.. :D! :P
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 11/19/2014 3:42:00 PM
block poet
Mmm, like yours Olive. You should try more of these every so often, James ;-)
Meade Avatar
David Meade
Date: 11/15/2014 9:25:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
I wish I could have been there!! well done.
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 11/19/2014 3:37:00 PM
block poet
Many thanks David, much appreciated, James.
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 6:19:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
I bet you were excited by this image James! Hugs Jan xxx
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 11/19/2014 3:25:00 PM
block poet
Aye, it's left a template in my mind. Thanks kindly Jan, James :) xx

Book: Shattered Sighs