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Balcony I Glimpse


On opening eyes
Looking, balcony I glimpse
Inverted by sight
Viewing naked silhouette
Emerge do I, excited






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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

November 16, 2014 at 7:19 AM

eyes on sunrise glance//bathe in face of sunset hue//a twist on the left//some hair and curves glide then sway// I frozen afire... :) this my version to yours Mr. James.. :D! :P

November 19, 2014 at 3:42 PM

Mmm, like yours Olive. You should try more of these every so often, James ;-)

November 15, 2014 at 9:25 PM

I wish I could have been there!! well done.

November 19, 2014 at 3:37 PM

Many thanks David, much appreciated, James.

November 15, 2014 at 6:19 PM

I bet you were excited by this image James! Hugs Jan xxx

November 19, 2014 at 3:25 PM

Aye, it's left a template in my mind. Thanks kindly Jan, James :) xx

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