Balconies From Afar - Collaboration With Poet Winged Warrior

Balconies From Afar

In a view from the balcony, above the aquamarine sea
All the gifts of creation are unwrapped, like bark on a birch tree
Where the strength of the soul is exposed to salt air, screaming in the sun
Look what exists from love, in each drop of water, it has begun

For the eternities stain the sacred sands of theistic time
Of viewing the celestial bodies that rupture with rhythmic rhyme
Admits shimmering stars that drip with love on a hot summers day
Thus our spirit sails to shores of heaven botanical ballet

For the splitting minutes that pass us by, in which we may forget
While the tide’s forces pull us like the spinning reel of a cassette
Our hearts pulsate with all the sparkling rivers flowing into one
What started as love is a chosen final dance, when we are done

As the moon and earth tango within the midnight ambient air
Our souls collaboratively collide through a falsetto flare
Then love shed its lucid layers amongst the empyreal abyss
The infinite skies await from balconies afar, a first kiss

Heidi Sands and Winged Warrior

6/14/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/15/2018 8:01:00 AM
This is such a lovely collaboration! Romantically beautiful !!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Mike :)
Date: 6/14/2018 10:56:00 AM
Good work you two, well done...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 6/14/2018 10:21:00 AM
Great job y'all!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Mike :)
Date: 6/14/2018 9:49:00 AM
An amazing collaboration on this romantic write. Nicely done, Heidi and WW. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you very much John :)
Date: 6/14/2018 7:50:00 AM
Heidi my friend...thank you for this poetic dance...you tango divine lol...your beautiful theme took us to a new rendition of Romeo & Juliet's...famous balcony scene...I am proud to collaborate with such a poetess such as yourself...love & light my dear friend...John-^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 8:32:00 AM
You are welcome WW and thank you too. You are an amazing writer and it worked out well. I am happy with what we came up with and enjoyed it. Take care :)
Date: 6/14/2018 7:38:00 AM
A very romantic write..Beautiful collaboration..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 6/14/2018 6:30:00 AM
Such a heavenly view from the balcony you have portrayed Heidi and WW! Charming words, and beautiful imagery adorn your poem. No surprise to me that the two of you have created a masterful rendering. Kudos to both!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your kind comment on this :)
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