Balance of Harmony

There's a balance of harmony inside our tranquility, a euphony aligned with affection and romance, substantial depth of contentment and stability, for you, my love, have given me a second chance. A euphony aligned with affection and romance, your tenacious devotion, my stubborn ways, for you, my love, have given me a second chance, thank you for taking to heart every word I say. Your tenacious devotion, my stubborn ways, although I'm not surprised by your loyalty, thank you for taking to heart every word I say, no matter what you still treat me like royalty. Although I'm not surprised by your loyalty, your unwavering ardent nature always prevails, no matter what you still treat me like royalty, I shall always express my sincerity in complete detail. Your unwavering ardent nature always prevails, substantial depth of contentment and stability, I shall always express my sincerity in complete detail, there's a balance of harmony inside our tranquility. New or Old 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper ~Date Written: March 20, 2016~
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Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 11:56 AM
- Balance of harmony a lovely choice of your poems, congratulations Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Luloo, back to congratulate you on another great win for your lovely Pantoum poem. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. Hugs Eve
Arnone Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 3:08 PM
Nice pantoum tribute to your beloved -- and, I learned a new word, euphony! Placement congrats! :-)
Dutta Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Congrats Laura to win on your wonderful poem. Hugs
Raven Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. What a wonderful flow to your Pantoum, soft and gentle are the words, each line to be savoured. This has to be a seven and into my faves. An excellent write....Mike.
Haight Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:21 PM
You are blessed with this 'balance of harmony' Laura. Beautifully written, and congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 9:55 PM
you are so sweet Sandra, seriously no one compares..thank you have a great night! :)-luloo
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 9:54 PM
thank you Sara :)-luloo
Gupta Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Wow, a Pantoum brimming with happiness of balance in harmony...Congratulations...
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Probir: )-luloo
A. Sharma Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 4:56 AM
Great work Laura loo.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Thank your Dr. Upma:)-luloo
May Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Congrats on a great win Luloo
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Joseph: )-luloo
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Lovely win Luloo, congratulations ...
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Charlie: )-luloo
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 4:48 PM
such a beautiful flow to your pantoum LuLoo many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:10 PM
thank you Jan :)-luloo
Hicks Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Each line is perfection ... and you express such beautiful emotions. I love pantoum, but I've never been good at keeping consistent rhymes with them, but you've excelled at it. Well done!
Scars Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thank you Tim very much :)-luloo
Onclaud Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 1:28 PM
this is really an astounding, charming read flowing like a river's affection, lou... delighted!..huggs
Scars Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Thank you Nette...:)-luloo
La France Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Laura, BEAUTIFUL, your pantoum flows so well I hardly noticed the repeated lines, this is wonderful, and I am loving it 7 !
Scars Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:06 PM
Thank you sweet lady...you are very sweet :)-luloo
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