Balance of Being

What a deep profound write dear Vijay - written and projected to us as a thought we all have and ask, but which answer to, can only be known by The Omnipotent. So well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Enjoyed this superb poem, Vijay:-) GL in Line's contest, my friend.

Deeply thoughtful. I enjoyed your poem!

Very nicely penned Vijay, best wishes

Very meditative, much to ponder here-

Only God knows the answer to this, as far as what happens next. "Rotating day and night" I find it fascinating how everything moves and changes. Amazing bite size poem, my dear friend. :) Brandy

So much introspective lines of deep here, we change and have our being accordingly Vijay, thank you for sharing, your gift of writing.

Time will certainly tell, Vijay!! right now, not looking too good (in my opinion)!!

This is an amazing poem Vijayji... To be frank, I asked my son to explain it to me... yes, as the universe seems to be expanding by dark energy.. . (this is what he said)... we really do not know ..... what will happen in future... Enjoyed reading this brilliant poem... God bless... ~ Ani

Wow, I need a dictionary for this great poem! Well done Vijay. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Wow! Vijay, What a deep, well-written, thought-provoking poem. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend, my friend;-) Alexis

Very thought provoking Vijay!! Balance to me is one of the most important aspects of the successful navigation of this life! Well done!!!

Whatever the outcome...it has been foreseen, my dearest friend, Vijay! Profound writing, good luck!

Bite size according to size but so full of meaning. Vert well done.

A very well crafted poem, with a question. If the human race is the only alien in the universe, self destruction or will they become the Gods of Olympus, and creation starts all over again?

Vijay, you wrote an amazingly well-crafted poem about cosmological balance and god's miracles in an ever-expanding universe. You portrayed so many beautiful realities about skies and stars in just four lines; my best wishes for the contest.