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Balance of Being

Life’s equilibrium hanging on force of gravity Rotating day and night uniformly in parity In mystique of universe ceaselessly expanding; Will vagaries of time tip the balance of being? October 1, 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/9/2021 8:01:00 AM

What a deep profound write dear Vijay - written and projected to us as a thought we all have and ask, but which answer to, can only be known by The Omnipotent. So well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 10/5/2021 4:32:00 PM

Enjoyed this superb poem, Vijay:-) GL in Line's contest, my friend.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/4/2021 6:37:00 PM

Deeply thoughtful. I enjoyed your poem!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2021 6:35:00 AM

Glad you stopped by BJ with your kind feedback--many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 10/4/2021 8:42:00 AM

Very nicely penned Vijay, best wishes

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2021 6:34:00 AM

Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/4/2021 8:07:00 AM

Very meditative, much to ponder here-

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2021 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Michelle---much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/3/2021 7:18:00 PM

Only God knows the answer to this, as far as what happens next. "Rotating day and night" I find it fascinating how everything moves and changes. Amazing bite size poem, my dear friend. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2021 4:46:00 AM

Yes--indeed it is all fascinating. Much appreciate my dear friend your visit and comments. Many thanks, Brandy.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/3/2021 3:44:00 PM

So much introspective lines of deep here, we change and have our being accordingly Vijay, thank you for sharing, your gift of writing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2021 4:44:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments Vienna. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2021 3:08:00 PM

Time will certainly tell, Vijay!! right now, not looking too good (in my opinion)!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2021 4:43:00 AM

Indeed time will tell. Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/3/2021 7:42:00 AM

This is an amazing poem Vijayji... To be frank, I asked my son to explain it to me... yes, as the universe seems to be expanding by dark energy.. . (this is what he said)... we really do not know ..... what will happen in future... Enjoyed reading this brilliant poem... God bless... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2021 8:14:00 AM

Your son is brilliant Ani. Amazing forces are at play that maintain the balance....but we don't fully understand the universe. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/2/2021 10:29:00 AM

Wow, I need a dictionary for this great poem! Well done Vijay. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2021 6:16:00 AM

Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/2/2021 9:39:00 AM

Wow! Vijay, What a deep, well-written, thought-provoking poem. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend, my friend;-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2021 6:15:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks for your kind feedback, Alexis.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/2/2021 8:31:00 AM

Very thought provoking Vijay!! Balance to me is one of the most important aspects of the successful navigation of this life! Well done!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2021 9:05:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Mike with your thoughtful comments. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/2/2021 3:33:00 AM

Whatever the outcome...it has been foreseen, my dearest friend, Vijay! Profound writing, good luck!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2021 9:04:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your insight. Much appreciate. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2021 1:51:00 AM

Bite size according to size but so full of meaning. Vert well done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2021 9:03:00 AM

Appreciate your supportive comments, as always, Victor. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/2/2021 1:46:00 AM

A very well crafted poem, with a question. If the human race is the only alien in the universe, self destruction or will they become the Gods of Olympus, and creation starts all over again?

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2021 9:02:00 AM

A good question you pose for us to contemplate. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Harry. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/1/2021 4:30:00 PM

Vijay, you wrote an amazingly well-crafted poem about cosmological balance and god's miracles in an ever-expanding universe. You portrayed so many beautiful realities about skies and stars in just four lines; my best wishes for the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2021 9:01:00 AM

Thank you for being there--- for your support on Soup. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Lasaad.