Baking Joy

His joy shone while sweet baking and icing with me,
shone on me, him and our cat for he was just three.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 1:43 PM
Awww. This sweet one got an HM with Line. Which puts it in top ten. Congrats
Jones Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on your placement!
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:33 PM
Gosh I never saw this yet. So sweet
Crandall Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Sweet poem, I remember watching my mom bake.
Daniel Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Cute one, CayCay:) P. S.. I am doing well by God's grace. Just busy with my job and family life, don't have much time for poetry
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 11:22 PM
Simple innocence underscores the domestic routines' tangible link that bathes in its genuine warmth: Aloha, my friend.
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:36 PM
Aww a cute image!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:04 PM
loved your couplets and the underlying metaphors. well done.
Godwin Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Many thanks, Sara, it's a true 'sweet' memory. CayCay
Poet Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 1:03 PM
Wonderful couplets with fantastic metaphoric layers. Good luck with the contest.
Godwin Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, SP, it is a true 'sweet' memory. CayCay
Goldsmith Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 1:01 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I had cats as a child. They sure were fun. "Good Luck" Have a Blessed weekend writing away.........
Godwin Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, Paula. CayCay
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