Bahama Acrostic Message



B een too long since my last vacation travel trip.

A bsolute island beauty does relax my job’s grip.

H alting busy is easy on heavenly beach strips

A long this islands’ multi jeweled peaks and tips.

M y tropical gratefulness shall never dip.

A ll main island life moves at a fun paced clip

S o I may stay with paradise at my fingertips.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Just fell on this oldie for some reason and I see it's an oldie that i saw before. Guess what today is? Galentine's Day. Happy Galentine's Day, sweetie. i even did a blog on it. I love that modern word!!
Yvonne Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 4:40 AM
A very clever write. Well done.
Martin Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 12:38 PM
Very clever. Hope you don't get caught! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 10:14 AM
CAycay, I am really happy you are on the winner list. Congrats for you. Soupie!!
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on your win girl Hugs
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:53 PM
You paint a very lovely picture of the Bahamas, and I love the hidden message, CayCay:) Congratulations on this merited win. Regards // paul
Murray Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:50 PM
I am green with envy. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:24 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Burch Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations Caycay!! Well done!! Big Hugggs deb
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:25 PM
CayCay, I love this! So many great entries...so hard to place! This could have easily placed higher up! <3 The boss must be so mad, working extra time for lost money and the absence of a thief! Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 12:54 PM
A very creative Acrostic CayCay. Soup mail* : )
Turner Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 8:21 AM
I hope you stayed out of trouble:) A very fun place! Nice acrostic CayCay.
Pett Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 5:53 AM
I really like this CayCay, well written and made me smile brilliant.
Ball Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:19 AM
Too cute Cay Cay. It's always more fun if it's a gift from someone who can afford it. Well done. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:33 AM
ha ha ha no wonder you lost your interest in the job - paradise Island at his expense lol :-) Good luck in the contest:-)hugs Jan xx
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