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Bag of Spiders

Bag of spiders, I scream in awe to see! My best collection from that pigeon pea tree All yellow brown crawlers, they’re tiny So cute when they hug and push their friends or enemy Do you think they also have crab’s mentality? My brother and I love playing spiders On stick, they fight like sumo wrestlers Whoever wins a spider derby will be a free homeworker And a loser will be a certified whole week dishwasher Do you want to join in my favorite sport with my brother?

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Valsa George

Date: 6/20/2023 9:49:00 PM

What a funny game you and your brother play ! Children should be encouraged to play this game more often as mothers will be relieved from some of their monotonous routine works. Enjoyed reading your poem, dear Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 6/22/2023 8:21:00 AM

Ha ha. You're right my dear poet friend Valsa. This is a true unforgettable experience during my childhood years. I was even bitten by those spiders and it hurt a lot. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments. Blessings to you always. I'll visit you again soon ok. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/12/2023 10:28:00 AM

A cute/fun write. I will leave the spiders to you. Have a blessed day.............

Len Gasun
Date: 6/22/2023 8:19:00 AM

Ha ha ha.. this was a true story during my childhood years with my younger brother my dear poet friend Paula. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments. Blessings to you always. I'll visit you too soon and the others here ok? Many Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/12/2023 9:15:00 AM

you had better win. the punishment is hard.

Len Gasun
Date: 6/22/2023 8:17:00 AM

Ha ha ha.. this was a true story during my childhood with my younger brother my dear poet friend Victor. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your comments. Blessings. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 6/12/2023 6:49:00 AM

Poem Written ----June 12, 2023 20.48pm