Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

Bag of Spiders

Bag of spiders, I scream in awe to see!
My best collection from that pigeon pea tree
All yellow brown crawlers, they’re tiny
So cute when they hug and push their friends or enemy
Do you think they also have crab’s mentality?

My brother and I love playing spiders
On stick, they fight like sumo wrestlers
Whoever wins a spider derby will be a free homeworker
And a loser will be a certified whole week dishwasher
Do you want to join in my favorite sport with my brother?

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Valsa George June 20, 2023 at 9:49 PM What a funny game you and your brother play ! Children should be encouraged to play this game more often as mothers will be relieved from some of their monotonous routine works. Enjoyed reading your poem, dear Len. Len Gasun June 22, 2023 at 8:21 AM Ha ha. You're right my dear poet friend Valsa. This is a true unforgettable experience during my childhood years. I was even bitten by those spiders and it hurt a lot. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments. Blessings to you always. I'll visit you again soon ok. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith June 12, 2023 at 10:28 AM A cute/fun write. I will leave the spiders to you. Have a blessed day............. Len Gasun June 22, 2023 at 8:19 AM Ha ha ha.. this was a true story during my childhood years with my younger brother my dear poet friend Paula. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments. Blessings to you always. I'll visit you too soon and the others here ok? Many Hugs

Victor Buhagiar June 12, 2023 at 9:15 AM you had better win. the punishment is hard. Len Gasun June 22, 2023 at 8:17 AM Ha ha ha.. this was a true story during my childhood with my younger brother my dear poet friend Victor. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your comments. Blessings. Hugs

Len Gasun June 12, 2023 at 6:49 AM Poem Written ----June 12, 2023 20.48pm