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supple body in a white nightshirt that slips from a round pink shoulder caressing the sweet willfulness of a plump waist her peasant face shining, over stimulated full cheeks that cushion light mud brown eyes, ornate longing lower lip near quivering silent fear or wicked curiosity? breasts expansive yearning flesh delicate seduction soft hand reclaiming a goblet yielding obedience telling me, "I was fully alive once too!" note pad away what melts into me? that goes outside the frame that ought to be known Rubens' painting uncommon intimacy tucked into dark corners beating heart heavy like my stroked steps that whisper to the ground eager to learn her mystery Poem composed: February 4, 2021 Revised: April 15, 2021 Sensual Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 2/10/2021 4:41:00 AM
Beautiful, Brian! Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/10/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate your encouraging review. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 2/9/2021 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Enjoy your day with blessings...........
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/9/2021 2:40:00 PM
Hello Paula I hope that you are well. Thank you for posting a positive response. Take care of yourself. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 2/8/2021 10:28:00 AM
Beautifully sensual Brian, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2021 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Kind of you to stop by + leave such a positive thumbs up. Cheers, Brian
Date: 2/8/2021 7:36:00 AM
Nicely done Brian.. Congrats on your win :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2021 7:42:00 AM
My appreciation for your kind regards, Carol. Take care. Brian
Date: 2/8/2021 7:17:00 AM
ah no surprise to see your name on my winners's list again! i like this even more than the one from my other contest, hence the higher placement this time..found the unusual angle, very sensual without being overly erotic; the closing lines in particular are very good - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2021 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Charlotte. Editing purged some eroticism of my original write prior to this posting. I wasn't sure if the readers would grasp fully the art patron as notetaker on the sensual fullness of Ruben's model. Best wishes, Brian

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