Baffling

supple body in a white nightshirt
          that slips from a round pink shoulder
          caressing the sweet willfulness
                                   of a plump waist
her peasant face shining, over stimulated
          full cheeks that cushion light
          mud brown eyes, ornate longing
lower lip near quivering
          silent fear or wicked curiosity?
breasts expansive
          yearning flesh
          delicate seduction
soft hand reclaiming a goblet
          yielding obedience

telling me, "I was fully alive once too!"

note pad away
what melts into me?
that goes outside the frame
that ought to be known

Rubens' painting
          uncommon intimacy
          tucked into dark corners
          beating heart heavy
          like my stroked steps 
          that whisper to the ground
          eager to learn her mystery
          






Poem composed: February 4, 2021
Revised: April 15, 2021
Sensual Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/10/2021 4:41:00 AM
Beautiful, Brian! Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/10/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate your encouraging review. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 2/9/2021 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Enjoy your day with blessings...........
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/9/2021 2:40:00 PM
Hello Paula I hope that you are well. Thank you for posting a positive response. Take care of yourself. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 2/8/2021 10:28:00 AM
Beautifully sensual Brian, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2021 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Kind of you to stop by + leave such a positive thumbs up. Cheers, Brian
Date: 2/8/2021 7:36:00 AM
Nicely done Brian.. Congrats on your win :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2021 7:42:00 AM
My appreciation for your kind regards, Carol. Take care. Brian
Date: 2/8/2021 7:17:00 AM
ah no surprise to see your name on my winners's list again! i like this even more than the one from my other contest, hence the higher placement this time..found the unusual angle, very sensual without being overly erotic; the closing lines in particular are very good - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2021 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Charlotte. Editing purged some eroticism of my original write prior to this posting. I wasn't sure if the readers would grasp fully the art patron as notetaker on the sensual fullness of Ruben's model. Best wishes, Brian
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