Baffling

supple body in a white nightshirt
          that slips from a round pink shoulder
          caressing the sweet willfulness
                                   of a plump waist
her peasant face shining, over stimulated
          full cheeks that cushion light
          mud brown eyes, ornate longing
lower lip near quivering
          silent fear or wicked curiosity?
breasts expansive
          yearning flesh
          delicate seduction
soft hand reclaiming a goblet
          yielding obedience

telling me, "I was fully alive once too!"

note pad away
what melts into me?
that goes outside the frame
that ought to be known

Rubens' painting
          uncommon intimacy
          tucked into dark corners
          beating heart heavy
          like my stroked steps 
          that whisper to the ground
          eager to learn her mystery
          






Poem composed: February 4, 2021
Revised: April 15, 2021
Sensual Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Beautiful, Brian! Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate your encouraging review. Best wishes, Brian
Goldsmith Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Enjoy your day with blessings...........
Sambourne Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 2:40 PM
Hello Paula I hope that you are well. Thank you for posting a positive response. Take care of yourself. Best wishes, Brian
Allison Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Beautifully sensual Brian, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Sambourne Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 12:27 PM
Thank you, Jan. Kind of you to stop by + leave such a positive thumbs up. Cheers, Brian
Mitra Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:36 AM
Nicely done Brian.. Congrats on your win :)
Sambourne Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:42 AM
My appreciation for your kind regards, Carol. Take care. Brian
Puddifoot Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:17 AM
ah no surprise to see your name on my winners's list again! i like this even more than the one from my other contest, hence the higher placement this time..found the unusual angle, very sensual without being overly erotic; the closing lines in particular are very good - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Sambourne Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Thank you Charlotte. Editing purged some eroticism of my original write prior to this posting. I wasn't sure if the readers would grasp fully the art patron as notetaker on the sensual fullness of Ruben's model. Best wishes, Brian
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace