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Watched the trailer this morn of the recently released film "Magic Trip"... which very obviously influenced this write.  Just me living in the moment... Happy day!

Bad Trip

Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when
Misty's train track trip went rotten
Psychedelic metal feelin'

Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when
Groovy sparks of steel soared reelin'
All 'twas left was yellow cotton

Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when
Misty's train track trip went rotten

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Written by Nancy Jones in the noonday heat of August 7, 2011
Inspired by Nette Onclaud and her contest, “In the Afterglow”

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Sara Kendrick August 15, 2011 at 3:12 PM Creative work ...Congrats.Sara

Jack Horne August 15, 2011 at 2:20 PM Many congratulations on all your wins, Nancy : )

Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2011 at 10:33 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Nancy. Love, Carol

Don Johnson August 15, 2011 at 12:07 AM all twas left was yellow cotton, sounds final hey, bad trip rotten, great poetry baba,

Dr.Ram Mehta August 14, 2011 at 8:31 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, nancy

Debbie Guzzi August 14, 2011 at 7:34 PM ahhh now here we have great originality!! Huzzah! yes she sure did look [at second glance] like a hippy flower child of old! Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love [loved the mini dialect too!groovin' on a sunday afternoon ;)]

Carrie Richards August 14, 2011 at 6:06 PM Unique and interesting twist on this contest!! Congratulations on your win, Nancy...you did not go for the obvious as most of us did!

John Freeman August 14, 2011 at 5:20 PM Nancy, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on third place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 4:15 PM Congrats Nancy on third place win in Nette's contest with this excellent entry luv..

Sidney Beck August 14, 2011 at 3:50 PM well done Nancy....well deserved girl ! ! (written in the heat of the night )

Judy Ball August 13, 2011 at 5:58 AM This is an inteeresting write myfriend. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Doris Culverhouse August 9, 2011 at 9:15 AM Hasn't it been so steamily hot lately....I have been having a hard time breathing. I hate to go outside.

Don Johnson August 7, 2011 at 6:33 PM misty's train track trip went rotten:) cos she'd just run outa cotton:) there'd be no hanging tonight:) love it babe, Don

Jack Ross Jr. August 7, 2011 at 2:04 PM Outrageous fun I Love it...wonderful write...with love...old Jack

Joseph Osita August 7, 2011 at 1:50 PM Very well penned! Best wishes in the contest