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Watched the trailer this morn of the recently released film "Magic Trip"... which very obviously influenced this write. Just me living in the moment... Happy day!

Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when Misty's train track trip went rotten Psychedelic metal feelin' Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when Groovy sparks of steel soared reelin' All 'twas left was yellow cotton Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when Misty's train track trip went rotten ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written by Nancy Jones in the noonday heat of August 7, 2011 Inspired by Nette Onclaud and her contest, “In the Afterglow”

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2011 3:12:00 PM

Creative work ...Congrats.Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 2:20:00 PM

Many congratulations on all your wins, Nancy : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2011 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Nancy. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 8/15/2011 12:07:00 AM

all twas left was yellow cotton, sounds final hey, bad trip rotten, great poetry baba,

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2011 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, nancy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/14/2011 7:34:00 PM

ahhh now here we have great originality!! Huzzah! yes she sure did look [at second glance] like a hippy flower child of old! Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love [loved the mini dialect too!groovin' on a sunday afternoon ;)]

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/14/2011 6:06:00 PM

Unique and interesting twist on this contest!! Congratulations on your win, Nancy...you did not go for the obvious as most of us did!

John Freeman

Date: 8/14/2011 5:20:00 PM

Nancy, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on third place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2011 4:15:00 PM

Congrats Nancy on third place win in Nette's contest with this excellent entry luv..

Sidney Beck

Date: 8/14/2011 3:50:00 PM

well done Nancy....well deserved girl ! ! (written in the heat of the night )

Judy Ball

Date: 8/13/2011 5:58:00 AM

This is an inteeresting write myfriend. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/9/2011 9:15:00 AM

Hasn't it been so steamily hot lately....I have been having a hard time breathing. I hate to go outside.

Don Johnson

Date: 8/7/2011 6:33:00 PM

misty's train track trip went rotten:) cos she'd just run outa cotton:) there'd be no hanging tonight:) love it babe, Don

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/7/2011 2:04:00 PM

Outrageous fun I Love it...wonderful write...with love...old Jack

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/7/2011 1:50:00 PM

Very well penned! Best wishes in the contest