Bad Trip

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Watched the trailer this morn of the recently released film "Magic Trip"... which very obviously influenced this write. Just me living in the moment... Happy day!

Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when
Misty's train track trip went rotten
Psychedelic metal feelin'

Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when
Groovy sparks of steel soared reelin'
All 'twas left was yellow cotton

Magic bus curbed pranksters' zeal when
Misty's train track trip went rotten

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Written by Nancy Jones in the noonday heat of August 7, 2011
Inspired by Nette Onclaud and her contest, “In the Afterglow”

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2011 3:12:00 PM

Creative work ...Congrats.Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 2:20:00 PM

Many congratulations on all your wins, Nancy : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2011 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Nancy. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 8/15/2011 12:07:00 AM

all twas left was yellow cotton, sounds final hey, bad trip rotten, great poetry baba,

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2011 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, nancy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/14/2011 7:34:00 PM

ahhh now here we have great originality!! Huzzah! yes she sure did look [at second glance] like a hippy flower child of old! Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love [loved the mini dialect too!groovin' on a sunday afternoon ;)]