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Inspired by Wizard of Oz and Lizzie Borden.

Madness etched on his face Tin Man cut short the chase And with the axe he proudly flaunted Claimed the heart he always wanted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/18/2018 1:03:00 PM
Jeff: That adds another dimension to that story. I thought the gal imagined he had a heart all along, now you tell me he "acquired it". Thanks for sharing your insights with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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