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Bad Timing

I wanted someone like, someone with your heart, someone with your soul, someone who would make me smile, even if just for a while, someone with your walk or even with your talk... Then you walked in as if in my dreams I could hardly believe my eyes, was it really you? I wanted to pinch myself, there you were, the man of my dreams. You smiled at me, I smiled back, Imagine my disgust... When my alarm went off!!

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Date: 7/27/2010 5:48:00 AM
Wow, Wilma! Love your write! It happens too often that an alarm clock interferes with some nice dreams, hahaha! Thanks for all your comments and al die beste en 'n groot week! ....Gert:)
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:08:00 PM
hahaha another one of those "bad dream" poems. Clever one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/26/2010 11:31:00 AM
hahaha bad timing indeed--goodness can we chuck that alarm clock out the window??? i better check that pic you sent me (& nope I won't laugh! gee why would I, you siren you?)--i can't multi-task waaahhh.... nikko :)
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Date: 7/26/2010 7:31:00 AM
Oh, how rude of your alarm clock! What bad timing. Ha!
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