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HE MISSES THE PENALTY Acts cool - Looks fool It's wide Off side! He moans Then groans Blues score Fans roar Last place Sour face 03~19~17

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Doug Vinson

Date: 3/26/2017 2:27:00 PM

Ha, Jan - so true. You do see some awfully sour and sorrowful faces... But no matter what, the U.K. produces some of the best football hooligans there ever could be. : )

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 7:08:00 PM

LOL I try to avoid watching anything to do with footie - have only ever been to one match in my life that was enough to put anyone off for life:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 3/20/2017 9:41:00 AM

This was great. I love the lines, "It's wide Off side!" Nicely done Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2017 7:54:00 AM

Thank Chris I hope my footle poems will inspire people to take part in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/20/2017 6:34:00 AM

Excellent Jan! I love reading your poetry! 7 ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2017 7:52:00 AM

Thanks Connie I know my fun style is not to everyone's taste but if I can make people smile that's the best thing to me:-) hugs jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/20/2017 1:24:00 AM

Great one JAN...You are a genius....Loved it...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/20/2017 2:16:00 AM

lol I am far from that lol a bird brain more like:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 3/19/2017 5:45:00 PM

First place footle Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2017 6:17:00 PM

lol - Jean I do hope you will write some for the contest and no I won't be entering a poem in my own contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/19/2017 4:38:00 PM

LOL Loved this, I am sure both Tim and I, had no idea you were a fan of hockey and the St Louis Blues!!! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/20/2017 2:09:00 AM

not me them I'm fugly lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/20/2017 12:01:00 AM

well, I dare say a lot of bad losers here, we call them the "beautiful ones" LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2017 4:43:00 PM

It could apply to many sports ... I was actually thinking of football but at the end of the day winning isn't the be all and end all and I hate to see bad losers:-( hugs Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2017 4:05:00 PM

GREAT examples of how you like those footle stories. DANG, Jan. the ones I wrote for you a long time ago I had put in a contest of Frank's. GEEEEZ

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2017 4:50:00 PM

I love doing a string of footles as a story but will also accept five plus un linked footles each with a clever title:-) I am sure you will come up with something fabulous for me:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/19/2017 2:57:00 PM

You lose...we booze...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2017 2:58:00 PM

that's true Tim the bars are the winners in so many ways!:-) hugs jan xx