Bad Influence

The kids come over
Bringing a wall of "Drama"
No other problems
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Halliday Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 12:44 AM
My kids never moved. Drama is ongoing. Nice write.
Halliday Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 1:19 AM
As I'm still harvesting tomatoes and cucumbers, I make many Macedonian provincial salads (sort of a Greek salad with feta but without olives). Learned to make it while serving with UN Peacekeepers just south of Kosovo.
Konos Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Can we all come over too? What's for dinner? Take your time, think about it but we are "easy to please" and hard to "impress"
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Soupie!
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 10:53 PM
oh boy, THOSE KIDS!!! hey, thanks for the win in your contest and for that nice list for me to view all your winners tonight.
La France Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Judy, oh yes the drama is dramatic, love your senryu it truly is life, 7, and I want to thank you so much for the wonderful win in your Senryu contest, I am honoured
Nunez Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 6:52 AM
Acerbic wit, Judy. :)
Wigley Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Ah, the turmoil of youth. Sharp, piece of writing, Judy. Viv x
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 12:42 PM
very clever Judy! Hugs jan xx
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