Bad Hair Day

One Christmas day when a bald man called Ray,
Gave his femme fatale, a silk negligée.
She whispered, please close your eyes,
While I touch up, your surprise.
But his surprise was a hair piece toupee.

    12 / 18 / 2021.
    For the contest XMAS LIMERICK
    Sponsor Andrea Dietrich.
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Ashley Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Such a fun limerick, George. Your last line is a clever and grand finale. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes to you for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 4:38 PM
I really like the funny surprise at the end of this one. Congrats on your win in my contest, George. Merry Christmas too.
M  Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Very clever George….enjoyed. Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 6:34 AM
Depends on where he was bald…just say’n. Good one.
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