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Bad Dog

Hark! Hark! The pesky dog doth bark, And deposits indiscretions in the park! Perhaps doggie wouldn't be such a klutz, If masters would learn to mind their mutts! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (c) 2014 All Rights Reserved Using a ton of poetic license, this write is based on an old nursery rhyme!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2014 4:39:00 PM

:D You sure know how to make me laugh, Bob. As for CL's comment below, the Chihuahua next door leaves deposits of substantial size on my lawn. LOL Witty write, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/14/2014 8:26:00 PM

Now how did you know I needed a smile.? Sadly though, this is a real problem. Now what nursery rhyme? Im brain dead today. BG

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/17/2014 4:40:00 PM

I'd like to know which nursery rhyme inspired the write too! Can't think of a single one that is anything like it. Guess we're both "brain dead." LOL