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Bree Black bought Blythe six sets of sheets, which Blythe soon sold to Susie Shoop. Sheet seller Susie was so fleet. She sold, for more, to Clista Coop. Then choosy Susie bought brown cleats, fine fritters, and pre-shrunk silk skirts. Blythe blew her bounty at the mall. Bree Black found out and was quite curt: “Sheet slighter, Blythe, you gal with gall, next time I’ll buy myself chic shirts.” Date: January 14, 2020 Contest Title: Twist My Tongue Poetry Contest placed 6th (of 13) Sponsor: Nina Parmenter Date: December 24, 2020 Contest: Tongue Twister Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joe Sandler

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Date: 1/23/2020 8:05:00 PM
Congrats!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/23/2020 8:49:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 1/23/2020 7:31:00 PM
very well done, Janice. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/23/2020 8:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 1/23/2020 2:09:00 PM
What a fun poem Janice, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/23/2020 3:28:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. Janice
Date: 1/21/2020 8:17:00 PM
I couldn't even get to the end of this one, Janice! Great fun! Congrats too! :) Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/21/2020 8:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice
Date: 1/21/2020 4:35:00 PM
A fun one congrats!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/21/2020 8:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Richard. Janice
Date: 1/16/2020 11:19:00 PM
The 'sh's' followed by the s's or vice versa really tied my tongue! Good fun! Cheers, Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/17/2020 8:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon! I read my poem several times--got tongue-tied every time! Janice
Date: 1/16/2020 9:06:00 PM
G'day Janice … talk about a poem designed for speed reading. Sorry Janice but this isn't one. What a great tongue twister! Terrific Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2020 9:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. I can't read it fast either! Janice
Date: 1/15/2020 8:16:00 AM
Wow, that was definitely a tongue twister and then some. Really cool Janice, best wishes in the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/15/2020 8:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris. Janice
Date: 1/15/2020 7:50:00 AM
Definitely tongue twister--best for a win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/15/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 1/15/2020 1:04:00 AM
Wow a fantastic tongue twister! Clever super cool! Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:27:00 PM
lol.. I read it in the morning and lost my tongue.. Great entry in the contest Janice..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/14/2020 11:18:00 PM
THANK YOU so much, Jenish! Janice

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