Janice Canerdy Poet Rhyme

Bad Blythe

Bree Black bought Blythe six sets of sheets,
which Blythe soon sold to Susie Shoop.
Sheet seller Susie was so fleet.
She sold, for more, to Clista Coop.
Then choosy Susie bought brown cleats,
fine fritters, and pre-shrunk silk skirts.
Blythe blew her bounty at the mall.
Bree Black found out and was quite curt:
“Sheet slighter, Blythe, you gal with gall,
next time I’ll buy myself chic shirts.”


Date: January 14, 2020
Contest Title: Twist My Tongue Poetry Contest   placed 6th (of 13)
Sponsor: Nina Parmenter


Date: December 24, 2020
Contest: Tongue Twister Challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joe Sandler

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Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 8:05 PM Congrats! Janice Canerdy January 23, 2020 at 8:49 PM Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 7:31 PM very well done, Janice. Congrats on your win. Janice Canerdy January 23, 2020 at 8:50 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice

Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:09 PM What a fun poem Janice, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Janice Canerdy January 23, 2020 at 3:28 PM Thanks so much, Jan. Janice

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2020 at 8:17 PM I couldn't even get to the end of this one, Janice! Great fun! Congrats too! :) Gershon Janice Canerdy January 21, 2020 at 8:36 PM Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2020 at 4:35 PM A fun one congrats! Janice Canerdy January 21, 2020 at 8:36 PM Thanks so much, Richard. Janice

Gershon Wolf January 16, 2020 at 11:19 PM The 'sh's' followed by the s's or vice versa really tied my tongue! Good fun! Cheers, Gershon Janice Canerdy January 17, 2020 at 8:22 AM Thanks so much, Gershon! I read my poem several times--got tongue-tied every time! Janice

Lindsay Laurie January 16, 2020 at 9:06 PM G'day Janice … talk about a poem designed for speed reading. Sorry Janice but this isn't one. What a great tongue twister! Terrific Janice - Lindsay Janice Canerdy January 16, 2020 at 9:36 PM Thanks so much, Lindsay. I can't read it fast either! Janice

Chris Green January 15, 2020 at 8:16 AM Wow, that was definitely a tongue twister and then some. Really cool Janice, best wishes in the contest Janice Canerdy January 15, 2020 at 8:05 PM Thanks so much, Chris. Janice

Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 7:50 AM Definitely tongue twister--best for a win, Janice. Janice Canerdy January 15, 2020 at 7:51 AM Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 15, 2020 at 1:04 AM Wow a fantastic tongue twister! Clever super cool! Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

Jenish Somadas January 14, 2020 at 10:27 PM lol.. I read it in the morning and lost my tongue.. Great entry in the contest Janice.. Janice Canerdy January 14, 2020 at 11:18 PM THANK YOU so much, Jenish! Janice