Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Couplet

Back To You

Seems all roads carried me away with the breeze
I stare at the blood on my hands and my knees
No matter which road I chose I ran into a wall
Sometimes I would run and sometimes I would crawl
Suddenly I can see the sky turning blue
Now I know I’m heading on back to You
Through hard times and the bad choices I’ve made
When I was alone, despondent, afraid
When I feared the fire of Hell was my due
Through those times, Dear Lord, You’ve seen me through
I look at my life and I wonder why
I look at my choices and bow my head and cry
Life is a struggle until the last day is through
I continue my journey on my way back to You

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Wilma Neels June 19, 2011 at 3:36 AM Wow, I love this Vince.. We sometimes wonder why life is a struggle and yet we continue on, knowing that God's plan for our lives are perfect even His timing is.. I really enjoyed this write of yours.. Making it a fav as well :-) hope your Sunday will be a blessed one

Gary Fields May 23, 2011 at 6:20 PM ok! Vince, this is something that I can really respect. You know that you can't just beat a rhym like that. But you can believe I can. This is light and somehow delightful! Alway's make the good write.......up up! GF

Gerard Keogh Jr. May 13, 2010 at 8:45 AM I truly admire the sentiment in this poem, Vince. Lines 10 through 16 are my favorites as they have power and send this across the finish line with a kick. Thank you for your kindness. Coming from a fine poet like you, it means a lot! Regards, Gerard.

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2010 at 3:07 PM well, glad I found this one in the middle of the other two poems becuase if I understood your most recent post, I didn't quite agree completely with it and I didn't dare to open up your poem on healthcare. haha. Anyway, I really love this one here! LUv, andrea p.s thanks for seeing my blog. Just wish you had voted!!

Elaine George April 7, 2010 at 7:24 AM So true and so heartfelt, dear Vince. Thank you for sharing. Lainie

Gareth James April 6, 2010 at 4:01 PM Awsome! Fantastic poem. takes a man to bow and cry! I have always said you can always tell a real man if he has admitted he has cried....From one man to another. Brilliant

Sue Mason March 18, 2010 at 11:53 AM Well, I don't know about the struggle but the journey is incredible. Without all those "hard times" (that I caused myself ... smile) I know I wouldn't be the person I am today ... smile ... and neither would you so jump for joy my friend ... its clear sailing now !! And, you've got mail ... smile ...

Debbie Guzzi March 4, 2010 at 6:33 AM Hope your feeling a bit better? A sad write and a bit hard on a good man! Light & Love

James Foulk February 27, 2010 at 1:32 PM a touching piece of work Vince, nicely done.

Audrey Haick February 22, 2010 at 2:11 PM This is a most beautiful prayer, Vince and I know it made His Spirit sigh. Blessings always, Peace, Audrey

Susan Palli February 16, 2010 at 1:49 PM Lovely poem, thnks

Brian Strand February 15, 2010 at 12:16 AM Congrats on your recent contest success Vince.Rgds Brian

Farah Chamma February 10, 2010 at 11:47 PM "Now I know I'm heading on back to You"...A beauty indeed. Faith is the only thing that keeps even a young girl like me going =) Thank you for this write and also thank you for being the only one to read my blog =D hehe...I think I have to make the title more...well beguiling!

Carol Sunshine Brown February 10, 2010 at 3:48 AM An amazing heartfelt write Vince. Nice to see a post from you again. Love, Carol

Mike Butler February 9, 2010 at 9:27 AM This is a very honest and sincere poem. Keep writing! -Mike