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8/24/2026 for Wake Me Up When September Ends Poetry Contest sponsored by Daniel Henry Rodgers 

Premiere Contest WinnerBack to School (DHR)

Would I, a young boy, ever tire
of bike-riding on those streets, tree-lined,
whose leaves in fall have turned to fire,
as summer days, unhurried and kind,
give way to Autumn and plans much higher,
to enrich my growing child’s mind?

Fix a flat on my Stingray bike?  I don’t mind! 
I’d gladly fix a rusty, rubber tire,
or do a task or chore of any kind;
but no, I won’t go back to school’s hell fire,
and write on a paper, thinly lined,
and forget my kite, to drift, e’er higher.  

Yet, my grade level must also grow higher,
and I must cultivate and feed my mind, 
and forget the lazy days and rope swing tire.
I hope my teacher this year will be kind.
In time, I’ll feel inside, the burning fire,
to scan shelves of books, thickly lined. 

So, I and the other children gamely lined
up, outside class, as the sun rose higher.
Inside: “Annette would you much mind,
if I sit next to you.  My feet are quick to tire?
Thank you, you are so very kind”,
I said and saw a glint of laughter or of fire.

Indeed, it was not books that lit my fire
as my heart fell, hook and sinker, lined.
It makes me wonder if teachers ever tire 
of watching a crushing child lose his mind
as they guide toward aspirations, higher,
of the scholastic, educational kind.
   
So, here’s my thanks to teachers of every kind,
and to the everlasting fire 
to convey knowledge with faces, lined,
aiming always, forever higher,
to guide and develop a child’s mind - 
persevering heroes that never tire.

Tree swing tire, your time, too, will come, in kind.
Green lined streets will replace those on fire 
when the sun is higher, and summer returns to mind.
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Edmonds  Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 3:58 AM
Well done David, congratulations on your win in the contest, a fantastic read… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 2:40 PM
Thanks, Beryl, I'm glad you liked it! School days - remember?
MITRA Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 10:44 PM
Dulcet David, 🌸 A heartfelt congratulations, good poet! Thy “Back to School” beguiles—a child’s merry revolt slowly ripening into a meditation on 'growing, learning, and the fire by which reluctance becomes aspiration.' I loved thy recurring 'fire, height, lines and tyre', and especially that “glint of laughter or of fire”—where schooling suddenly becomes an awakening of the heart. 💕 Most touching: thou dost honour the teachers without banishing the child—the kite, swing and summer yet remain. 'Thou hast let learning enlarge childhood, not erase it.' 🤔 Well won, Dionysian David—verily. Keep thy fire a-burning, and thy swing a-swaying! ✨🔥
Crandall Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 1:25 PM
Thanks, yes, enlarge childhood, not erase it - thanks Mohit - well put!
Borg Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 3:52 PM
From a bike riding kid to a math majoring adult, and now a well deserved Trophy with your first placing. Congratulations, dear David. A wonderful win.
Crandall Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Haha, I guess that's right! Thanks, Pascal!
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations to you on your winning work in Daniel's contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Crandall Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Daniel Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 11:30 PM
A wonderful trophy win, David, congratulations👏
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Thanks, Joanna!
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Wow. How did I miss this one? Sestinas take work and you hit this out of the ball park. Congratulations on your trophy win. 👏 Amazing poetry
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 8:02 PM
Hey, David. I really admire the way you grew this poem from a prosaic recounting of the joys of summer into a profound statement about summer's place in the various phases of a man's life. Bravo! ~ Gershon
Crandall Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 8:15 AM
Thanks, Gershon!
Smith  Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 7:28 PM
A warmly nostalgic sestina that captures the tug-of-war between summer freedom and the reluctant return to school. The rotating end-words work beautifully across the seasons, bike rides, first crush, and eventual appreciation of teachers, giving the poem both formal cohesion and heartfelt charm.🏫🏖🧒😍
Crandall Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 8:15 AM
Thanks, Alison!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 12:50 PM
Loved reading your "Back to School" write/story. Guess we always have the teachers we love/remember. "Good Luck" I did, "When September Ends You Must Wake Me Up."  Have a fun day writing away..........
Crandall Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:31 PM
Thanks, Paula - have a great day! School days, school days, good ol golden rule days!
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