'back To Life'

the essence captured every stroke from his brush revitalized her slowly with every breath memories started flowing she remembered who she was
Inspired by Russell Sivey’s “Sedoka me any subject” contest Written by: Wilma Neels ©260220121808

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/2/2012 8:55:00 PM
WILMA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/1/2012 2:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! This is an amazing write and leaves room for interpretation by the reader. I love that! Thank you for your kind comments today and always. You are one of the first people to comment on my work when I was new to the site. It is more appreciated than you know. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:51:00 PM
Very good one Wilma...congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:46:00 PM
Hey, I see you placed with this one. AWESOME, and congratulations.
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:10:00 PM
A lovely poem, Wilma. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/29/2012 6:18:00 AM
beautiful poem, in fact a masterpiece of poetry. harry. congrats.
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:38:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win.Very good Sedoka.
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:21:00 PM
incrediblry artistic, wilms... my sweet congrats! :) huggs!
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Date: 2/28/2012 6:59:00 PM
congrats Wilma on a dynamic win for this incredible write for Sedoka contest luv..
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:53:00 PM
whaddawhadda Sedoka! wow!
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:50:00 PM
Very passionate in a subtle way..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:02:00 AM
You sure created such an interesting story here! Really like how painting played a role in her recovery, I hope I got it tight? Good to know you're ok, me, my connection right now reeks... Mwahugs...love your avatar pic btw!
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:27:00 AM
I must try this form... but I can't take a class on it , because I'm broke from paying my editor and chief. lol..... Well written piece hun.... love and endless hugs Michael
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:19:00 AM
ah I love this Wilma..really special...love,Deb
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