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'back To Life'

the essence captured 
every stroke from his brush 
revitalized her slowly
with every breath
memories started flowing
she remembered who she was


Inspired by Russell Sivey’s
“Sedoka me any subject” contest 
Written by: Wilma Neels

©260220121808

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Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 8:55 PM

WILMA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sara Kendrick

March 1, 2012 at 2:26 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 29, 2012 at 10:54 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win! This is an amazing write and leaves room for interpretation by the reader. I love that! Thank you for your kind comments today and always. You are one of the first people to comment on my work when I was new to the site. It is more appreciated than you know. Blessings, Rhonda

Jonas L. Rozario

February 29, 2012 at 10:51 PM

Very good one Wilma...congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

February 29, 2012 at 9:46 PM

Hey, I see you placed with this one. AWESOME, and congratulations.

Kim Merryman

February 29, 2012 at 7:10 PM

A lovely poem, Wilma. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Christopher Bunton

February 29, 2012 at 5:03 PM

Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 29, 2012 at 7:14 AM

Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

February 29, 2012 at 6:18 AM

beautiful poem, in fact a masterpiece of poetry. harry. congrats.

Kash Poet

February 29, 2012 at 1:38 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win.Very good Sedoka.

Nette Onclaud

February 28, 2012 at 10:21 PM

incrediblry artistic, wilms... my sweet congrats! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 28, 2012 at 6:59 PM

congrats Wilma on a dynamic win for this incredible write for Sedoka contest luv..

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2012 at 3:53 PM

whaddawhadda Sedoka! wow!

Sara Kendrick

February 26, 2012 at 1:50 PM

Very passionate in a subtle way..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 26, 2012 at 11:02 AM

You sure created such an interesting story here! Really like how painting played a role in her recovery, I hope I got it tight? Good to know you're ok, me, my connection right now reeks... Mwahugs...love your avatar pic btw!

Michael J. Falotico

February 26, 2012 at 9:27 AM

I must try this form... but I can't take a class on it , because I'm broke from paying my editor and chief. lol..... Well written piece hun.... love and endless hugs Michael