Back Seat Survivor

Percy was driving a long black hearse
Carrying a body which made him terse.
To unwind he tried singing
Which sounded like pinging.
But the corpse said he’d heard worse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 1:38 PM
Paul, I enjoyed reading your humorous limerick! Love, Kim
Schneiter Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Thank you, Kim. It's both kind and thoughtful of you to comment. I hope all is well with you and those whom you cherish.
Smith Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 10:36 AM
good one Paul...lol
Schneiter Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Thanks, Tim. I'm an incorrigible admirer of your poems . . . they are uniformly excellent.
A  Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Paul. Thank you for sharing. Forever *SKAT*
Schneiter Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Thank you, SKAT A (an awesome poet-woman if ever there was one). I value and appreciate your thoughtfulness in commenting.
Labeau Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 10:49 PM
hallelujah
Schneiter Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Thank you, Catherine. That's what I said ("hallelujah") when I managed to complete it.
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