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Back In Time

Back in time!
   Back in time!
With blackberry wine…
and don’t tell grandpa…

Just a sip,
   a sip of the warm embrace...
Just you and me

Before time did race
and you dear, sweet Grandma...
fell out of place.

5/11/2019

grandmotherfree verse

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Gershon Wolf

May 12, 2019 at 3:12 PM

Such furtive fun, Kim! Reminds me a bit of Ray Bradbury. Intimately penned; felt like you were speaking only to me. Bravo. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

May 12, 2019 at 3:38 PM

Thanks so much, Gershom!

Jennifer Proxenos

May 12, 2019 at 12:16 PM

Grandparents are very important in the formative years of a child and by the time you could have a sip of wine with your gran, you had a very strong bond - i still remember my grandfather with whom i had a wonderful and loving relationship - the memory of him will never die! Beautifully penned Hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

May 12, 2019 at 3:39 PM

Thank you, sweet Jennifer!

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