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Back In the Past

**Rondeau** (Pattern--aabba, aabR, aabbaR) Take this trip with me into Past life history, these times renewed In this cognative state These memories inflate Back in the days with my crew Back in the days, while I grew With the boys with whom I knew I would never grow to hate Take this trip with me Even after all the planes I flew The friends that I've been through I see you all in this nostalgic state Visions help keep me semi-great These are my friends with whom stay true Take this trip with me Jared Pickett.....:JP}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/25/2010 7:40:00 AM
Jared, This poem has a nice nostalgic feel... almost dreamy in some sense. Enjoyed! Dane Ann
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Date: 9/18/2009 11:08:00 AM
Super write, especially relating to friends. I still have the same four since 1972, and i don't think we will ever part>>James
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful use of this form, Jared. I think it is lited on the Forms under Resources. I've never tried it ... looks too difficult ... LOL ...
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Date: 8/4/2009 4:10:00 AM
a trip to the past,there s nothing better......sweet sixteen times--sweet nostalgia--well penned--charma
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