Jared Pickett Poet Rondeau

Back In the Past

**Rondeau**
(Pattern--aabba, aabR, aabbaR)

Take this trip with me into
Past life history, these times renewed
In this cognative state
These memories inflate
Back in the days with my crew

Back in the days, while I grew
With the boys with whom I knew
I would never grow to hate
Take this trip with me

Even after all the planes I flew
The friends that I've been through
I see you all in this nostalgic state
Visions help keep me semi-great
These are my friends with whom stay true
Take this trip with me


Jared Pickett.....:JP}

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 25, 2010 at 7:40 AM Jared, This poem has a nice nostalgic feel... almost dreamy in some sense. Enjoyed! Dane Ann

James Fraser September 18, 2009 at 11:08 AM Super write, especially relating to friends. I still have the same four since 1972, and i don't think we will ever part>>James

Sue Mason August 6, 2009 at 9:22 AM Beautiful use of this form, Jared. I think it is lited on the Forms under Resources. I've never tried it ... looks too difficult ... LOL ...

Charmaine Chircop August 4, 2009 at 4:10 AM a trip to the past,there s nothing better......sweet sixteen times--sweet nostalgia--well penned--charma