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Back Door On the Fourth Floor of Nowhere

I opened the door and stepped out.....into nowhere!
looking both bright and cheerful, in my blue swimwear,
smell was fresh, sky was blue but I stepped on thin air,
Thirty feet of steep drop, I wish I was elsewhere!!
flag hoist fluttered below me, pointing at my rear,
panic stricken said “God! save me! I have no spare!“
gathering pace I went down, pray land on soft chair,
twenty seconds of fly time, best eagles wont dare!
tried to use my arms like wings, wish I had a pair,
ladies watching screamed, like I was a grizzly bear!
Three windows down, hoist caught me, cannot tell you where....
six weeks of groin pain, was out of medical care! 
Back again on the fourth floor, my wife did not care!
Said she with nasty smile,”Next time please take the stair!!”

1st placement
Written 06/September/2020
William Kekaula sponsored
Your best Monorhyme poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 10:10 AM
A man's worse nightmare, indeed! The clever wit of your monorhyming pen left me laughing, Krish. Congratulations for your excellent win in William's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Thanks Susan! always a pleasure to hear from you ! My regards!:)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 9:54 PM
Wholeheartedly, I followed the story you had simply outlined, yet your ending line had me in hysterics. Blessings, Krish, for sharing your engaging-in-a-twist talents, Aloha!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thanks William!! Pleased you enjoyed it!! Aloha!!
Faulkner Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 9:17 PM
Clever use of monorhyme for the contest, I really liked 'I have no spare' (good luck out there!)
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 9:49 PM
Thanks Michelle! A man’s worse nightmare!:)
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Hilarious, Krish! Craig ought to love this one! I sure did! G.L. in the contest, gw
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Thanks Gershon! You are a good pal!!
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