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Back Against The Sea

Now and then the ocean is a blur in footprints so quickly nothing, spurred against that wild channeling — God, she took my memory, her baggy tides overrun, seaweed returned in the surf, serendipitous stun, How to follow you in your deep sea tomb — Sometimes I breathe in water to breathe in you, the gray ocean like a rod — my prayers stopped time, God, God — there floating within the sea fog's gloam, the buoys, and a girl's cheeks that froze.

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Date: 6/9/2025 6:41:00 AM
Oh this is so sad. You invoke God’s name to speak of your memory then your remembering brings back the exclamation of His name. Evocative and emotive…one of your very best, Paige! Fave!
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Date: 6/9/2025 5:50:00 AM
Impeccable imagery. So many people lost at sea or river. Cleverly done.
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Date: 6/9/2025 5:49:00 AM
Footprints vanish in the waves, Nicely penned
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Date: 6/8/2025 8:42:00 PM
i always know where to come to find this level of depth and mastery - glad i found this
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Date: 6/8/2025 6:55:00 PM
A stormy sea is depicted in your poem. I felt the force, the terror, and the lives lost as they went down the river. A fave
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Date: 6/8/2025 6:41:00 PM
Your poem describes a turbulent sea. I sensed the power and fear and the lost people who drowned. It has a persevering beat that reminds me of crashing waves.
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