Back Again

You came back, demand rent of my heart
act like it was nothing, again we can just restart.

You don’t hear a single word I say
even when I have nothing left to give away.

My broken bones beg for mending
for they know just what you are intending.

You’re leaving me no room to breathe
around my heart place your poison oak wreath.

I tell myself to stop this, you’re nothing that I need
for I know I can’t forever satisfy your greed.

But I believe you’re not ok, so I will never go too far
I’ll be the light across your sky, a moment’s shooting star,

I’ll breathe in the space where there is no air,
I will walk with broken bones, much to their despair.

You demand rent again on my heart
take yourself into their rafters, let the decay start.

And I don’t know why I fight for you this way
when you leave my heart in the open to oxidize and decay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/6/2010 2:51:00 AM
Some relationships can be so toxic while being intoxicating. Best of luck in this situation. Nicely written poem.
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Date: 11/5/2010 5:34:00 PM
Thnx for reading my writes and leaving comments... I appreciate this..And no, I'm not married.. I just enjoy writing love poems lol Later, JA
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Date: 11/5/2010 10:23:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across yours amongst these wonderful poems Madison. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2010 4:44:00 PM
Smile ~ It is Always such a pleasure to view "Your Beautiful Soul" &, I hope that life is treating "Your Treasures" so very brightly ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Lovely & Precious, Madison Thomer,' Amid The Beating Hearts Tender Raftors of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye My Dear!:) ~
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Date: 11/4/2010 4:37:00 PM
Smile ~ No one would Ever wish to leave such a beautiful heart amid such a moment "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless, Madison Thomer!!!'" ~ I know that I myself would Never wish to be a part of such unto, "Such 'A Beautiful Heart & Soul As Yours!!!'" ~ I have Always loved the absolute depth of "Your Beauties" gifted & amazing verse my dear &, this soul-stirring poe is the exact portrait as unto why; "Astonishingly Beautiful Amid This, Seemingly Bittersweet" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 11/4/2010 2:01:00 PM
Strange expression that...You came back, demand rent of my heart, Madison
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Date: 11/4/2010 12:39:00 PM
Very descriptive of a bad situation..I enjoyed your expressive work..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2010 12:39:00 PM
If someone is causing you this much sadness, Madison, you might consider letting go of a bad relationship. It's easier said than done, but perhaps you might find someone who will appreciate you. A very sad and moving poem. Love, Carolyn
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