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Back Ache

As I sat alone with my back ache                           
Looking for ways to ease the pain                           
I felt soft hands on my back                                              
As a gentle form moulded against me                         

Looking for ways to ease the pain                     
My hands caressed her tousled hair                                
As a gentle form moulded against me            
Pleasure mingled with pain

My hands caressed her tousled hair
I felt soft hands on my back
Pleasure mingled with pain
As I sat alone with my back ache

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James Fraser

Date: 3/9/2011 7:49:00 AM

Back ache is not a nice thing to have Tahera. Nice Pantoum on the subject. Have a lovely day....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2011 11:10:00 AM

There is nothing greater than having someone to caress, Tahera. I hate to think of you sitting alone with a back ache, but it's amazing how much companionship and love can lift our spirits. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2011 12:21:00 PM

The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Tahera. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 7:29:00 AM

wow, sensuous writing here! THis is really nice and I sure would rank it high if I were doing a contest like this one!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 5:02:00 AM

Such a wonderful write Tahera my friend.. back pain is something I deal with off and on luv and soothing hands are always welcome ..good luck in the new contest.. a rare beauty ..