Baccalieu Episode

BACCALIEU   EPISODE

Portuguese  named  it when they found
Bacalhau  -  meaning  codfish island.  They knew
Its  essence  -  the  French called it Baccalieu, *
This dangerously rich fishing ground. 

Coming home to  St. John’s from Labrador,
Autumn  storm  swooped on us, undermanned,
As  we made west past the bare black island
Into Conception Bay,  two  miles from shore.

The boat pitched like a rocking horse -
Crashing down into every trough after  every crest.
The sleet  cut you in two from the west;
With our main boom nearly  in two with the force.

The boat - a toy,  the combers heeled her over  
And thrust the lee rail two foot under.
Baccalieu to port crashed  like overhead thunder:
No place to be in  late October.

The Baccalieu rocks -  lurking, lethal,  reaching
For the keel ,   and the sheer black cliffs wait                           
Above.   We claw her from the rocks of hate     
With clouds of storm-petrels  screeching.

Now she plunges deeper in the dark
Trying to steady herself, to  end  the ordeal,
As we struggle, four hands on the wheel,
To end the  threat  to our heavy-laden ark.

Bringing her head round into Conception Bay
We ease our  grips on the wheel,
Deeper  water under  the keel  -
Now we breathe. We’ll  be home by end of day.


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     * Note:   For pronunciation experts,   regardless of 
                    the  French spelling,  this dangerous
                    island is called "Bakaloo" in Canadian English.

                  
      * Geographical note:  Baccalieu is a few miles north 
         of the port of St. John's,  Newfoundland,   Canada.
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Guzzi Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 2:08 PM
A thrilling mariners tale he, reminded me of the wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald? I loved all the new words and the FEEL of the sea's spray! & growl! [So how's my rising star doing? I could use your help with an animal Limerick if you haven't done one & please comment on Black Out & Raven's Plight if you haven't. I'm enjoying doing the narrative form.] Light & Love
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January 24, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Huge rocks can tear into the structure of a ship just like the iceberg did with the Titanic, Syd. Having steered my own boat through treacherous waters, I could relate to the angst the crew must have been feeling on this journey. In a storm, your boat does feel like a "toy." I was glad this ship made it to Conception Bay. This reads like a thriller; reminds me a bit of "The Perfect Storm" and it's brilliantly written to keep us in suspense. Well done, Syd! Love, Carolyn
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