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Was born
To warm

Your heart
Was smart

Head bare
No hair

Small nose
Cute toes

Fat pink
Small stink

Sweetheart
I fart

Loud cry 
Goodbye

Ma Ma
Ba Ba

Want tit
Good bit

I plead
You feed

I puke
Rebuke

Bad smell 
From tail

I poop
Like soup

I pee 
You flee

Breakthrough
I grew

Like storm
Age norm

Kid gloves
True love


3/22/2017

Contest Name:	FABULOUS FUN FOOTLES
Sponsored by: 	JAN ALLISON

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/1/2018 8:19:00 PM
Like this, Eve. YOu have done footles with this one! YOu should enter one like this in the contest!
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Date: 4/2/2017 4:51:00 AM
Very nice piece. Well done!
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Date: 4/1/2017 6:17:00 AM
So cute throughout and precious at end...not the stinky end...lol! Congrats!
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Date: 3/31/2017 5:42:00 PM
Lovely and clever write Eve, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :))
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Date: 3/31/2017 5:40:00 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis
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Date: 3/31/2017 5:17:00 PM
Absolutely delightful Eva and I LOVE the accompanying picture:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/28/2017 1:15:00 AM
Love it Eve, a real beauty for Jan's contest, Good luck......Vera
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Date: 3/24/2017 9:33:00 PM
haha. Sunshine is right. The poop queen will love it!! And a baby is sure all of this and MORE. Great job, Eve.
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Date: 3/24/2017 3:17:00 PM
- A perfect poem to our "poop queen" :))) - Luck in the contest, Eve - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2017 6:13:00 PM
Hi Eve....you've got lots of sweet and sour moments in your write. Thanks for making me smile...hugs to you!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/22/2017 6:36:00 PM
Hi gorgeous, was wondering where you were :) missed you...... Just remembering those moments 34 years ago. Hahaha. Thank you
Date: 3/22/2017 5:43:00 PM
ma ma...ba ba.... : )
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/22/2017 6:45:00 PM
lol...still fresh in my mind as my youngest is 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/22/2017 6:40:00 PM
Have got to add this to the list.... first words out of a baby's mouth ....
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2017 6:14:00 PM
lol Your mind is languishing in the land of Footle.
Date: 3/22/2017 5:40:00 PM
Love this footle Eve, I must try one myself.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/22/2017 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth, they are fun ~*

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