Notes About The Poem

Baby's Scrapbook

Was born
To warm

Your heart
Was smart

Head bare
No hair

Small nose
Cute toes

Fat pink
Small stink

Sweetheart
I fart

Loud cry 
Goodbye

Ma Ma
Ba Ba

Want tit
Good bit

I plead
You feed

I puke
Rebuke

Bad smell 
From tail

I poop
Like soup

I pee 
You flee

Breakthrough
I grew

Like storm
Age norm

Kid gloves
True love


3/22/2017

Contest Name:	FABULOUS FUN FOOTLES
Sponsored by: 	JAN ALLISON
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Like this, Eve. YOu have done footles with this one! YOu should enter one like this in the contest!
Michaels Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 4:51 AM
Very nice piece. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 6:17 AM
So cute throughout and precious at end...not the stinky end...lol! Congrats!
Pett Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Lovely and clever write Eve, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :))
Y. Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Absolutely delightful Eva and I LOVE the accompanying picture:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Duggan Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 1:15 AM
Love it Eve, a real beauty for Jan's contest, Good luck......Vera
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 9:33 PM
haha. Sunshine is right. The poop queen will love it!! And a baby is sure all of this and MORE. Great job, Eve.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 3:17 PM
- A perfect poem to our "poop queen" :))) - Luck in the contest, Eve - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lane Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Hi Eve....you've got lots of sweet and sour moments in your write. Thanks for making me smile...hugs to you!
Roper Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:36 PM
Hi gorgeous, was wondering where you were :) missed you...... Just remembering those moments 34 years ago. Hahaha. Thank you
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 5:43 PM
ma ma...ba ba.... : )
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:45 PM
lol...still fresh in my mind as my youngest is 7
Roper Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Have got to add this to the list.... first words out of a baby's mouth ....
Lane Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:14 PM
lol Your mind is languishing in the land of Footle.
Kinch  Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Love this footle Eve, I must try one myself.
Roper Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth, they are fun ~*
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