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Hey momma Oh you’ve gone pale You recognize THIS face Pure concentration Sheer determination Hey momma Can you smell what I’ve done I’ve s q u e e z e d out a big pooh I bet you can’t wait To change my crappy nappy! BABY FACE WHAT'S YOU THINKIN Contest Picture B 1/3/19

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/5/2019 8:34:00 AM

Awesome poem, Jan, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2019 2:51:00 AM

thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 2/5/2019 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win JAN, great Job!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2019 8:30:00 AM

Thanks Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/4/2019 12:24:00 PM

You are so funny Jan. This really has me laughing! Keep up the humor...you are the Queen of humor! A sure winner with this cute poem. That baby is a real character! xxoo : )

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2019 12:28:00 PM

I saw the pic and pooping sprang to mind and I don't need any excuse to write poop poetry and make folk smile:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/3/2019 6:59:00 PM

Oh that's a good one. Haahahhahahaha

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2019 7:03:00 PM

Thanks Ml:-) I don't need an excuse to write a poopy poem but when I saw the pic i knew what i was going to write about lol:-) hugs jan xx

Old Buck

Date: 1/3/2019 2:03:00 PM

Jan: Did my older sister send you my baby picture. Shame on both of you. Keep up the great humor, we all need that. oldbuck

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2019 2:52:00 PM

lol Old Buck the pic is one the sponsor used, maybe you could ask him where he got the pic lol lol:-) Glad I made you smile as some folk don't like my poopy poems well it's tough I won't take that sitting down lol, they don't need to read them and rest assured the poop will continue to flow lol:-) hugs jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/3/2019 1:37:00 PM

You and your pooh stories, was it a log or a splat? I hope it was a log, Gl in the contest Jan, keep the heart smiling, that's what makes life bearable. xo

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2019 1:56:00 PM

LOL Pixie there were many reasons I chose to write a poop poem lol, from the look on his face i would deffo think it was a log lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/3/2019 7:59:00 AM

Lol... Nice take on the theme Jan..GL in the contest..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2019 12:12:00 PM

Thanks Joseph, it was the ideal opportunity to write about poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lost Silence

Date: 1/3/2019 6:47:00 AM

Haha, love the last line

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2019 7:45:00 AM

oh I've just read your poem lol so glad to find a kindred spirit lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/3/2019 6:38:00 AM

Hilarous! I have to run back now and look at the picture, Jan, because I know the picture will make me laugh also thinking this is what you were thinking when you saw it!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2019 7:46:00 AM

I remember the days when my son was little and we could tell by his expression just what to expect lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/3/2019 6:32:00 AM

Haha, used to hate doing that, thankfully my kids are all grown up now . Don't get involved in the technical side when my grandson delivers, not my problem lol. Good luck. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2019 7:47:00 AM

lol about the grandson Tom, I get grief for writing poop poems, yet everybody poops and so i will never stop the flow of my turd words so to speak lol:-) hugs Jan xx