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Baby Face What's You Thinkin

Hey momma Oh you’ve gone pale You recognize THIS face Pure concentration Sheer determination Hey momma Can you smell what I’ve done I’ve s q u e e z e d out a big pooh I bet you can’t wait To change my crappy nappy! BABY FACE WHAT'S YOU THINKIN Contest Picture B 1/3/19
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Roper Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Awesome poem, Jan, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 2:51 AM
thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on your win JAN, great Job!!
Allison Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 12:24 PM
You are so funny Jan. This really has me laughing! Keep up the humor...you are the Queen of humor! A sure winner with this cute poem. That baby is a real character! xxoo : )
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 12:28 PM
I saw the pic and pooping sprang to mind and I don't need any excuse to write poop poetry and make folk smile:-) hugs jan xx
Kiser Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Oh that's a good one. Haahahhahahaha
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Thanks Ml:-) I don't need an excuse to write a poopy poem but when I saw the pic i knew what i was going to write about lol:-) hugs jan xx
Buck Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Jan: Did my older sister send you my baby picture. Shame on both of you. Keep up the great humor, we all need that. oldbuck
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 2:52 PM
lol Old Buck the pic is one the sponsor used, maybe you could ask him where he got the pic lol lol:-) Glad I made you smile as some folk don't like my poopy poems well it's tough I won't take that sitting down lol, they don't need to read them and rest assured the poop will continue to flow lol:-) hugs jan xx
Rose  Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 1:37 PM
You and your pooh stories, was it a log or a splat? I hope it was a log, Gl in the contest Jan, keep the heart smiling, that's what makes life bearable. xo
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 1:56 PM
LOL Pixie there were many reasons I chose to write a poop poem lol, from the look on his face i would deffo think it was a log lol:-) hugs jan xx
May Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Lol... Nice take on the theme Jan..GL in the contest..
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Joseph, it was the ideal opportunity to write about poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Silence Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Haha, love the last line
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:45 AM
oh I've just read your poem lol so glad to find a kindred spirit lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Hilarous! I have to run back now and look at the picture, Jan, because I know the picture will make me laugh also thinking this is what you were thinking when you saw it!
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:46 AM
I remember the days when my son was little and we could tell by his expression just what to expect lol:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 6:32 AM
Haha, used to hate doing that, thankfully my kids are all grown up now . Don't get involved in the technical side when my grandson delivers, not my problem lol. Good luck. Tom.
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:47 AM
lol about the grandson Tom, I get grief for writing poop poems, yet everybody poops and so i will never stop the flow of my turd words so to speak lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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