Raul Moreno Poet Choka

Babble of Water

The surge in motion
A soothing relaxing flow,
Trickling sounds of peace.
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Trickling sounds of peace
Rushing…current serenade, 
Calming stream…cascades.
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Calming stream…cascades
Ambient…natural lulls,
Babble of water.

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Tyler Martin April 27, 2009 at 10:32 PM Nice title, you are great at the choka form also.

Abe Lopez April 18, 2009 at 12:15 PM Your chola's express creativity and peace.

Tyler Davis April 17, 2009 at 11:48 PM Nice structure, you are extemely talented.

Laurie Ginn April 13, 2009 at 8:15 AM Love the form of this and your words are calming Raul

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 12, 2009 at 3:05 PM You did it again. Very nice choka. It almost looks like a bubble, too. Hummmm a shape choka. Nice work.

Barbara Gorelick April 11, 2009 at 7:52 PM I really like this form..well done. BG