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Babble of Water

The surge in motion A soothing relaxing flow, Trickling sounds of peace. * Trickling sounds of peace Rushing…current serenade, Calming stream…cascades. * Calming stream…cascades Ambient…natural lulls, Babble of water.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 10:32:00 PM
Nice title, you are great at the choka form also.
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:15:00 PM
Your chola's express creativity and peace.
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:48:00 PM
Nice structure, you are extemely talented.
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Date: 4/13/2009 8:15:00 AM
Love the form of this and your words are calming Raul
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Date: 4/12/2009 3:05:00 PM
You did it again. Very nice choka. It almost looks like a bubble, too. Hummmm a shape choka. Nice work.
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Date: 4/11/2009 7:52:00 PM
I really like this form..well done. BG
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