B-One

If You

Want A

Friend!:

Join

A

Gang!!

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Said on the Side of a Surprise Surprise 
     For a Pyro-Technical 
        Sunrise!

-Gray Squirrel

06-12-2025

lifefree verse

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Gray Squirrel

Date: 6/13/2025 2:12:00 AM

Gotta Qualify. You Can See It In The Whites Of Their Eyes.

Jacqueline Elston
Date: 6/13/2025 4:07:00 AM

Eye means 'fountain or spring' Beautiful part of the human body. Q. Qualify ? l understand youngster look to gangs for love they never had perhaps at home. But then becomes targets themselves fr rival gangs =violence :( Not easy to break free :( but it is possible.. l know some who have.

Jacqueline Elston

Date: 6/13/2025 2:07:00 AM

Q. why does anyone want to join a gang ?, it's something that always puzzle's me in the world. If want real friends..be a real friend, yes.

Gray Squirrel
Date: 7/12/2025 9:45:00 AM

I was generally considering conformity to any limitations for group acceptance, the concept of joining and being an identified member... stretching the definition of "gang." But I like to be extra brief for interpretations to be more dynamic. Gangs seem ridiculous to me, but then again, I have no real fondness for constant socialization.

B-One

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